Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	11-June 05:26:27 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 50365 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Red Dawn [time] => 2004-06-04 07:57:19 [hometext] => Just alittle story I wrote last night (this is not one of my dreams) [bodytext] => Past the fire
Thru the ring
Into the mare
Where Siren sings
The skin peels back
The drums now bleed
Bone all shatter
When they feed

I wake in sweat, but the sweat ain't mine. Hell, this isn't sweat. What is this? Ahhh ah (a light turns on) OH S***! It's blood! Blood? Who's blood? I'm not bleeding. What the....

Further into the scape we slide. Wondering what happend to our mind. Seemingly we sleep all the time. So why is it bloody when i find myself waking up?

(turns to black)
Past the fire
Thru the ring
Into the mare
Where Siren sings

With flesh no skin
Picking teeth with bones that splinter

Some demigod,devil, like angel
Sipping on marrow
Snapping the necks
Sucking the brains
Every last spec
Till the bones are dry
of every last respect

I wake up [comments] => 1 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 13 [informant] => rhei76 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Red Dawn

Contributed by rhei76 on Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 07:57:19 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Past the fire
Thru the ring
Into the mare
Where Siren sings
The skin peels back
The drums now bleed
Bone all shatter
When they feed

I wake in sweat, but the sweat ain't mine. Hell, this isn't sweat. What is this? Ahhh ah (a light turns on) OH S***! It's blood! Blood? Who's blood? I'm not bleeding. What the....

Further into the scape we slide. Wondering what happend to our mind. Seemingly we sleep all the time. So why is it bloody when i find myself waking up?

(turns to black)
Past the fire
Thru the ring
Into the mare
Where Siren sings

With flesh no skin
Picking teeth with bones that splinter

Some demigod,devil, like angel
Sipping on marrow
Snapping the necks
Sucking the brains
Every last spec
Till the bones are dry
of every last respect

I wake up

Copyright © rhei76 ... [ 2004-06-04 07:57:19]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Red Dawn (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 09:47:09 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

great imagery! very descriptive... great poem!

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com