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I remember your eyes.
God, you have dark eyes
They caught me unaware
What were you thinking of then?

I think I might have blushed
But I’m sure you didn’t see
How my breath caught
When I saw you look at me

I walked away that night
After trying to pretend
That you hadn’t raised my interest
And thus the story would end

But all those months later
To see you again was a surprise.
It hit me all over again
The unwritten message in your eyes

Watching you covertly
When I thought you couldn’t see
But the thing is the whole time
You were looking back at me

Too astonishing to believe
I’d finally found someone
Who could make the promise
That they might just be the one.

MW
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I remember your eyes

Contributed by evilfairy on Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 01:38:35 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

I remember your eyes.
God, you have dark eyes
They caught me unaware
What were you thinking of then?

I think I might have blushed
But I’m sure you didn’t see
How my breath caught
When I saw you look at me

I walked away that night
After trying to pretend
That you hadn’t raised my interest
And thus the story would end

But all those months later
To see you again was a surprise.
It hit me all over again
The unwritten message in your eyes

Watching you covertly
When I thought you couldn’t see
But the thing is the whole time
You were looking back at me

Too astonishing to believe
I’d finally found someone
Who could make the promise
That they might just be the one.

MW

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Re: I remember your eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by carmen_queasy on Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 04:53:00 AM AEST
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very nice :)

Re: I remember your eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 06:01:02 AM AEST
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Loved this one, great stuff

pixie xx

Re: I remember your eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 07:42:50 AM AEST
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Eyes.........they can be so many different things.
Sometimes mystery, sometimes vulnerability, but always fascinating.
Nice work

steve

Re: I remember your eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by fallensilence on Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 10:15:43 AM AEST
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amazing. this poem really touched me. -david

Re: I remember your eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by fastpitchqt on Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 01:16:10 PM AEST
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beautiful poem, and they say that peoples eyes are a window to their soul, just might be in your case. Eyes are very mesmerizing and I have lost myself in them before, but ended in heartbreak sadly.

Re: I remember your eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by hardrocker15198916 on Saturday, 20th May 2006 @ 01:37:23 PM AEST
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that was beautiful

my favorite stanza was

Watching you covertly
When I thought you couldn’t see
But the thing is the whole time
You were looking back at me

It made me think of all those other people who have caught my interest.

It was truely a beautiful write.

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