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The Passenger
Contributed by
secretwind
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Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 10:06:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The passenger closes his eyes and sits back as he rides on lifes train though surrounded by many people his silence is not strange, in his mind there's a view of fantasies and harmonies the landscape swirls by as he travels station to station with his thoughts with his dreams.
On the ride there are moments there are encounters real feelings of passion merge and flow deep, remembering the pain makes the vision shatter and he awakes from his dream.
He opens his eyes and looks around crippled pilgrims is all he sees talking heads talking frantically dancing... someones telling a tale a horror story the passenger nods his head pretending to listen if he could respond he would but he just rides on with his thoughts with his dreams.
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2004-06-03 22:06:20] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Passenger
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 12:09:55 AM AEST (User
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Very good writing as always.
Keep dreaming and fore u know it your dreams come true.
Luv, huggs, smiles,
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