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Array ( [sid] => 5005 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Almost Dead [time] => 2002-10-13 08:00:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Dying
bleeding wrists
a bullet to the head
It all seems so enticing
right now.

I see myself
lying all alone,
with my salty tears
falling down
off my face.

I want to choke,
I want to bleed,
I want to suffocate,
I want to die.

I send out a prayer-
please put my misery
to an end.

Dying
bleeding
crying
dying

Slit my wrists
or choke off
my breath-
I don't care anymore,
this life of mine
is nothing.

Everything is nothing,
everyone is nothing,
I am nothing.

Kill me,
hurt me,
destroy me-
it's already happening inside.

Take my air,
rip out my heart,
tear me to pieces-
I want you to.

I want this to die,
everything can die,
this pain is ruining me-
all I can do is cry.

Stab me,
rape me,
take my soul-
end it all!

Dying
bleeding wrists
a bullet to the head,
which enchanting method
will I choose...
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 518 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Vampy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Almost Dead

Contributed by Vampy on Sunday, 13th October 2002 @ 08:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Dying
bleeding wrists
a bullet to the head
It all seems so enticing
right now.

I see myself
lying all alone,
with my salty tears
falling down
off my face.

I want to choke,
I want to bleed,
I want to suffocate,
I want to die.

I send out a prayer-
please put my misery
to an end.

Dying
bleeding
crying
dying

Slit my wrists
or choke off
my breath-
I don't care anymore,
this life of mine
is nothing.

Everything is nothing,
everyone is nothing,
I am nothing.

Kill me,
hurt me,
destroy me-
it's already happening inside.

Take my air,
rip out my heart,
tear me to pieces-
I want you to.

I want this to die,
everything can die,
this pain is ruining me-
all I can do is cry.

Stab me,
rape me,
take my soul-
end it all!

Dying
bleeding wrists
a bullet to the head,
which enchanting method
will I choose...

Copyright © Vampy ... [ 2002-10-13 08:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Almost Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Sunday, 13th October 2002 @ 08:09:37 AM AEST
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wow! i can feel the emotion and pain dripping from this poem a wonderful write. I hope that this is a venting poem and isnt for real.

Re: Almost Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by Sandra on Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 04:55:43 AM AEST
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It showed the truth of one whom wishes to die, was greatly written. However, I also hope it is venting.

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