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The dead zone
Contributed by
adanawa
on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 04:01:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The Dead zone
Aplace so far away. yet so close
Stealing souls
from innoecent tricked
into thinking it was their time
imigages of the way to end it all
razor balde and pills
they lay on the floor
eyes open in terror
relizing the truth
life's blood seepd from veins
opened in anger
regret fills their heart
Silent screams fill the air
pleading for help
as the grim comes forth
the take the misguided away
Copyright ©
adanawa
... [
2004-06-01 16:01:42]
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Re: The dead zone
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by alecfernadez on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 04:27:30 PM AEST
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I liked this... alot, if this wasnt one of your best, your best must be beyond words incredible, because this poem is incredible, and in my eyes extremly well written, and passionate, and truthful
Well done and creating a great masterpiece |
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Re: The dead zone
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 11:34:29 PM AEST
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| very nice. =] |
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Re: The dead zone
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by Geykya on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 03:00:32 PM AEST
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| This poem is a nice balance of words..some people use to many and some not enuf, but yur arangement shows passion in yur writing and gets to the point without putting me to sleep...good write. |
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