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Inside Glimpse
Contributed by
jt
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Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 07:55:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Images portrayed
Visions worse than death we're told
A grasp apon meaning in life
We're unable to hold
Our lives become empty
Our souls give into the cold
A letter telling all importance
Unable to unfold
A tidal wave envelopes all
And leaves us drowned in sorrow
Nothings worse as nothing is
As tody is just tomorrow
Before the coming, before the end
A second soul to borrow
We see ourselves before our time
We're unable to follow
The meanings twisted, the truth is lies
We're better off if dead
In the light it shines, pure power
A blade against your head
The evil forseen, why didnt you react
Turned around and fled
The world is warped, you did it yourself
Now all you see is red
A surge of rage, of hate, of pain
Entraps a targeted mark
The red is gone, the deed is done
Your eyes once more are dark
Not with sorrow, but with malice
Now your bite is worse than your bark
You pick them up, you knock them down
Written out right from the start
But what of them. How do they feel
A selfishness now unendowed
You cannot go on, you cannot be seen
Mingling in with the crowd
Solitude, pure insanity
A breaking point thats not allowed
Youve ruined a bond like that of no other
I hope that know you are proud
Just to see, just to hold
Just to feel, just to show
Just to be, just be bold
Is it real, I dont know
If it hurts, it is pain
If its pain, let it flow
Like a tear in the rain
Let the wind start to blow
The pain within
With the likes never seen
Noone has gone
Where someone should have been
Someone help to turn
Impure thoughts clean
An inside glimpse to my life
Just to let off some steam
Copyright ©
jt
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2004-06-01 07:55:37]
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Re: Inside Glimpse
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 01:05:49 AM AEST
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WOW, BRAVO! BRAVO! BRAVO! JT.........This was a mighty deep and thoughtprovoking poem. Turning yourself inside out for all to know. What a wonderful thinker.....marvelously reasoned out, and I really liked the end.......repeat, repeat, repeat three times is for emphasis......A great write I could associate with!
And thanking you so much for commenting on my monkeys! Teehee
Poetic hugs
Lovingcritters
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Re: Inside Glimpse
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 11:21:53 PM AEST
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| brilliant write. nice philosophy and really shows emotion. very intriguing. =] |
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Re: Inside Glimpse
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by buchi on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 02:55:25 PM AEST
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| Pure ...imagery..and poetic contradictions..wind stand to blow...great write this... |
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