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Array ( [sid] => 499 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => No More Pain [time] => 2002-07-15 22:13:01 [hometext] => We never know who may be thinking this.Close friends,the person sitting next to you on the bus.We cant read a persons mind.And it is sad,but some people do deal with their hurt this way. [bodytext] =>

With a heavy heart,And tear filled eyes
I watched your car,Pull out of our drive

I kept thinking to myself,She cant be gone
I wanted to see,Your brakelights come on

I hoped we would work,If we gave it time
Time didn't work,You didn't change your mind

Its to late now,But I plainly see
You are my life,My world to me

As I walk in our home,All around I see
Are memories of our life,And what used to be

Now its a house,I dont call it a home
I have just given up,I dont want to go on

With strong drink in hand,I see mistakes I made
But I must do this,I cant be afraid

I have lost my Love, My Lover,My best friend
Now I close my eyes,To never open them again

I have nothing to live for,My living is done
With shaking hand,I pick up the gun

The explosion is loud,It shatters the night
My pain is now gone,I've given up the fight

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 243 [topic] => 36 [informant] => withpen_inhand [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

No More Pain

Contributed by withpen_inhand on Monday, 15th July 2002 @ 10:13:01 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

With a heavy heart,And tear filled eyes
I watched your car,Pull out of our drive

I kept thinking to myself,She cant be gone
I wanted to see,Your brakelights come on

I hoped we would work,If we gave it time
Time didn't work,You didn't change your mind

Its to late now,But I plainly see
You are my life,My world to me

As I walk in our home,All around I see
Are memories of our life,And what used to be

Now its a house,I dont call it a home
I have just given up,I dont want to go on

With strong drink in hand,I see mistakes I made
But I must do this,I cant be afraid

I have lost my Love, My Lover,My best friend
Now I close my eyes,To never open them again

I have nothing to live for,My living is done
With shaking hand,I pick up the gun

The explosion is loud,It shatters the night
My pain is now gone,I've given up the fight

Copyright © withpen_inhand ... [ 2002-07-15 22:13:01]
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Re: No More Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 10:54:41 PM AEST
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a great write, strong words..

jackee_line

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