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Do you remember
Contributed by
lildrama04
on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 09:28:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Do you remember
The day he was nailed to the cross
Do you remember
His life that he sacrificed
for our sins
Do you remember
the blood that he shed
Do you remember
the day that he was raised from
the dead.
Do you remember what
they did to him.
Do you remember people
yelling crucify him
Do you remember him
being whipped and having
to carry his own cross.
Do you remember him
Do you remember all the wonderful
things that he did for you.
I do cause he
died for my sins
He left the people
do that to him for us.
How could he let
them do that to him.
How could he let
them whip him
put a crown of thorns
on his head make him carry
his own cross.
I don't understand why
Jesus our savior in heaven
did what he did
But I will someday learn
to forget and forgive all the awful
things that they did to him.
Do you remember
The day he was nailed to the cross
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Re: Do you remember
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by nabokovfan87 on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 11:14:33 PM AEST
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hey, well ur poem was ok the message was great just could have been stronger and written differently to make the effect stronger on the reader. lemme know hwat u think of mine gl with everything.
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