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Array ( [sid] => 4987 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Immense feelings [time] => 2002-10-12 15:30:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => So madly in love
However our distance rips me apart
It seems I’m crying tears of blood
That drip slowly down my face

A clutter of feelings running wildly through my body
Inflamed by uncontrollable waves of emotion
Scrambled thoughts hang on
Praying for peace of mind
Unable to calm this overflow of emotions
Filled with what seems to be indecision and misdirection

Feeling so lost without you
Trying to get a grip on myself
Desperately aching to share life with you again
Slowly losing control of myself

Wondering what has happened to me
Screaming out in both delight and pain
Words lost within
Echoing over and over
In a shallow state of confusion

Realizing the indescribable feelings
That love has brought upon me
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 1109 [topic] => 22 [informant] => pickles99 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 312 [ratings] => 64 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Immense feelings

Contributed by pickles99 on Saturday, 12th October 2002 @ 03:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



So madly in love
However our distance rips me apart
It seems I’m crying tears of blood
That drip slowly down my face

A clutter of feelings running wildly through my body
Inflamed by uncontrollable waves of emotion
Scrambled thoughts hang on
Praying for peace of mind
Unable to calm this overflow of emotions
Filled with what seems to be indecision and misdirection

Feeling so lost without you
Trying to get a grip on myself
Desperately aching to share life with you again
Slowly losing control of myself

Wondering what has happened to me
Screaming out in both delight and pain
Words lost within
Echoing over and over
In a shallow state of confusion

Realizing the indescribable feelings
That love has brought upon me




Copyright © pickles99 ... [ 2002-10-12 15:30:00]
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Re: Immense feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 30th July 2004 @ 12:01:49 AM AEST
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terrific write. a lot of emotion shown.


Re: Immense feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by Walter on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 08:46:06 PM AEST
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good work, you are really emotional


Re: Immense feelings (User Rating: 1 )
by x0x_lorlor on Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 12:05:46 AM AEST
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very emotional poem.. ahah i like it! :D




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