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[aid] => mick
[title] => Laura's Gone!
[time] => 2004-05-30 12:40:06
[hometext] => She said she'd be here. she said i could talk to her if i was low... maybe i'm being selfish, because she has got another life as well, but... she's just placed me back in the dakness, and i can't get out!
[bodytext] => I don’t wanna write,
About why I’m sad.
And talking don’t help me,
It makes me go mad.
But, what I feel inside,
Is growing so fast.
It turns me into nothing,
And stirs up my past.
I don’t feel suicidal,
And I don’t wanna cut.
But the way my thoughts are changing,
I fear I’ll close up.
I don’t want darker pain inside me,
It eats through my head.
It swirls and twists my vision,
Until I rip through my flesh.
I don’t want to return there,
I’m trying to give self-harm up.
But the way this world is spinning.
Some times things are just too much.
I don’t think they care any more.
And I know for sure LAURA’S given up.
It’s just left me lying on the floor.
She said she’d be here…!
But she’s not.
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Laura's Gone!
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 12:40:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I don’t wanna write,
About why I’m sad.
And talking don’t help me,
It makes me go mad.
But, what I feel inside,
Is growing so fast.
It turns me into nothing,
And stirs up my past.
I don’t feel suicidal,
And I don’t wanna cut.
But the way my thoughts are changing,
I fear I’ll close up.
I don’t want darker pain inside me,
It eats through my head.
It swirls and twists my vision,
Until I rip through my flesh.
I don’t want to return there,
I’m trying to give self-harm up.
But the way this world is spinning.
Some times things are just too much.
I don’t think they care any more.
And I know for sure LAURA’S given up.
It’s just left me lying on the floor.
She said she’d be here…!
But she’s not.
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2004-05-30 12:40:06]
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Re: Laura's Gone!
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by pixie on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 12:46:32 PM AEST
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Awww your poem made me feel immense sadness, but you written it from the heart and expressed it well,
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Re: Laura's Gone!
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by krisseee on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 12:48:36 PM AEST
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| they're all the same as Laura |
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Re: Laura's Gone!
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by Brians_Sweety on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 01:11:42 PM AEST
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Oh my gosh!!!! AWESOME poem. This was very capturing.
keep your head on your shoulders right and don't ever cut or have suicidal thought!! All that does is eventually bring you more pain that you don't want.
Despite what was said in a previouse poem we all aren't like Laura. I am here for you if you need me. I know you don't know me I don't even know if you want to know me but if you do my e-mail addresses and stuff are on my home page thingie. You can PM me anytime I'm always willing to help!!!
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Re: Laura's Gone!
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by purplestary on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 01:37:51 PM AEST
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great write. i'm so glad your trying to give self harm up. i hope you succeed in that, because in the end it will only hurt worse if you do that. and i know you don't know me, but like steph said we're not all like laura. you can pm me anytime as well and send an e-mail whenever. i think my e-mail is in my profile somewhere or whatever..but i'm new here so i don't know exactly..and i can't member how i set it up..lol...but just in case here it is: starworld_15@hotmail.com
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Re: Laura's Gone!
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 03:50:29 PM AEST
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My friend...I felt each word of this write. To lose a love is tragic, but to lose a friend cuts even deeper.
It doesnt help to hurt yourself, all we can do is keep living and hope one day we find our peace of mind.
Very well done
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Re: Laura's Gone!
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 04:06:10 PM AEST
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I'm so sorry that Laura is gone. Please never place your trust in man.......just the Creator if you believe in a higher power? For man can not be trusted, but He will always be there for you and me. He will never let you down, never let lose of your hand.....if only you look and trust in Him.
Please feel free to write PM anytime. I will try to help.
Love you
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Re: Laura's Gone!
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by LiquidChaos on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 12:53:37 PM AEST
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::sigh:: don't you just love it when people say they know how deep it hurts when you screw up and cut again? i think we would know better. to live in this constant internal turmoil. to cut or not to cut. but hey. just cause laura left dosn't mean we're all like that. we're still friends right? i havn't left. i don't plan to. just keep writing and hold out for five more minutes. then the next five. you'll get through this no matter how impossible it seems right now. hold on.
great write!
addie |
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