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journey
Contributed by
Luinil
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Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 08:36:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Shadows lengthen and merge into darkness
The path grows dark under the trees
Rustling grows louder with a beating heart
All sleep but the one on the journey
Breath blends into mist in sharp coolness
Trudging through the mud, feet cry for rest
Eyes glare through the shadowy forest
Waiting to attack the weary traveler
Will the sun rise again
Or will the journey forever be drenched in night?
Each step further and closer to home
Every bleeding wound swells with ambition
No rest until the journeys end
Far from home and warmth
Another bend in the path may bring day
And a peaceful rest at the journeys end
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Luinil
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2004-05-30 08:36:52]
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Re: journey
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 09:51:27 AM AEST
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awww, thats is beautiful. i love that song too.
this is brilliant, the flow and language are great.
good write.
*hugs* phil xxx |
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Re: journey
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 07:33:52 PM AEST
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Your work is so beautiful. Let us hope the next bend bring the needed sight and journey's relief.
Rita |
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Re: journey
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 06:20:00 PM AEST
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| This is a cool poem, thanks for sharing it |
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