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Array ( [sid] => 49679 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => At the mercy of the Lord [time] => 2004-05-30 01:12:59 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Merging into darkness
I reminisce about a bliss
so beautiful
I forget for a moment
that I am in pain,
sadly I smile
as I fade into the mist
voices moan you are not alone
a teardrop falls
and that is beautiful too
in a strange way...
I am just a pilgrim
crippled by all the rage
talking heads laugh
when I fall off the wall
they seem to enjoy my pain.

A spark of hope
I can feel that it is real
a slight pause
as I am merging
now I start to question
my fate,
emotionally
I can never come back
that train is of the track
I am broken
and lost my way,
still a slight smile
as I merge into the shadows
cause voices moan you are not alone
you can still be saved.

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At the mercy of the Lord

Contributed by secretwind on Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 01:12:59 AM in AEST
Topic: insomniac

Merging into darkness
I reminisce about a bliss
so beautiful
I forget for a moment
that I am in pain,
sadly I smile
as I fade into the mist
voices moan you are not alone
a teardrop falls
and that is beautiful too
in a strange way...
I am just a pilgrim
crippled by all the rage
talking heads laugh
when I fall off the wall
they seem to enjoy my pain.

A spark of hope
I can feel that it is real
a slight pause
as I am merging
now I start to question
my fate,
emotionally
I can never come back
that train is of the track
I am broken
and lost my way,
still a slight smile
as I merge into the shadows
cause voices moan you are not alone
you can still be saved.

Copyright © secretwind ... [ 2004-05-30 01:12:59]
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Re: At the mercy of the Lord (User Rating: 1 )
by Aika on Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 01:28:23 AM AEST
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wish you were saved and never alone.... wish you happy smiles:-) Lovely write! Love, aika:-)

Re: At the mercy of the Lord (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 05:18:00 AM AEST
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Very deep, powerfull, write!
Hang tuff, my darlin 'cause your angels are already at your beckoning call.
God's mercies endure for ever!
Luv, huggs, strength, joy,
emy
God will put your enemies under your feet.
In Jesus name,
Amen!!!!

Re: At the mercy of the Lord (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 06:44:51 AM AEST
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this is a great poem.

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