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Array ( [sid] => 49607 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => POEM TO A BEN [time] => 2004-05-29 13:11:29 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Tell me how does it feel
looking me from outside
and laugh
when i have a hole in my heart
just waiting there,
hoping the time would stop,
and make you come next to me

Getting lost,
just to see you
and you laugh
while i'm finding an exit

It's over and i'm growing,
through out this pain
this hole
that gets deeper everytime
i talk about you
and think about it

Getting lost,
without knowing where to go
tears coming down
not knowing why
your laugh
could be the reason

dear ben song,
doesnt match with you anymore
poem to a horse does now
i wonder if you would call
i wish you could
but the fear makes me wish you won't

I always knew i shouldn't
but the feeling in me
ate me
and you tasted it
with your mouth full of *****

Let me tell you
Even though im insane
after of all this thinking and pain
There's nothing that makes me stay next to you
I'll be dead next to you
and you
buried next to me

yeah, yeah, yeah........ ben........

Lost, someone help me
should i call you for help?
no, you would not even listen
then why did you do all of this?
why did you waste your time?
just to make me suffer?

yea you wasted it, you tried to make me suffer
but you made me
stronger

yeah, yeah, ben... yeah, you wasted it

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 34 [informant] => ceci [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
POEM TO A BEN

Contributed by ceci on Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 01:11:29 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



Tell me how does it feel
looking me from outside
and laugh
when i have a hole in my heart
just waiting there,
hoping the time would stop,
and make you come next to me

Getting lost,
just to see you
and you laugh
while i'm finding an exit

It's over and i'm growing,
through out this pain
this hole
that gets deeper everytime
i talk about you
and think about it

Getting lost,
without knowing where to go
tears coming down
not knowing why
your laugh
could be the reason

dear ben song,
doesnt match with you anymore
poem to a horse does now
i wonder if you would call
i wish you could
but the fear makes me wish you won't

I always knew i shouldn't
but the feeling in me
ate me
and you tasted it
with your mouth full of *****

Let me tell you
Even though im insane
after of all this thinking and pain
There's nothing that makes me stay next to you
I'll be dead next to you
and you
buried next to me

yeah, yeah, yeah........ ben........

Lost, someone help me
should i call you for help?
no, you would not even listen
then why did you do all of this?
why did you waste your time?
just to make me suffer?

yea you wasted it, you tried to make me suffer
but you made me
stronger

yeah, yeah, ben... yeah, you wasted it





Copyright © ceci ... [ 2004-05-29 13:11:29]
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Re: POEM TO A BEN (User Rating: 1 )
by mountainhigh on Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 01:50:11 PM AEST
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We seek what others hide, we find what others seek.

Very good write.

Thanks for sharing.

Chris




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