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Hate Within
Contributed by
essentially9
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Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 10:40:48 PM in AEST
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DarkPoetry
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Hate Within
Your love drips down in scores
And the door to your heart closes
With every drop
Your heart stops
The love eliminated
Creates hate within
You can't stop feeling
The numbness
As your love drips down in scores
You lose all feeling and more
The hate is numbed
By the pain
The love eliminated
Caused unworthy feelings
And the hate consumes you within
Your love drips down
And hate fills with every drip
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Re: Hate Within
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by afterdark on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 01:46:55 PM AEST
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Do you need a hug I think you do...Anyhow i like this one..Your poems really say alot of you and us as a people..If that makes sense..
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