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Array ( [sid] => 49405 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sea of your memory [time] => 2004-05-27 22:15:24 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I find my self consumed by your waves.
calm seas suddenly made violent
Im struggling to stay afloat.
If I could make it to the shore,
I could escape your turbulent waters...
but your waves force me under,
I try to catch my breath
but all I take in is you....
and you starve out my air.
I fight to reach the surface,
and Im pushed further down...
and all I grasp is sand as I hit bottom...
theres no point to fight
Im lost, adrift,
waiting to drown....
in my sea of your memory.
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Sea of your memory

Contributed by holderofthestone on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 10:15:24 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I find my self consumed by your waves.
calm seas suddenly made violent
Im struggling to stay afloat.
If I could make it to the shore,
I could escape your turbulent waters...
but your waves force me under,
I try to catch my breath
but all I take in is you....
and you starve out my air.
I fight to reach the surface,
and Im pushed further down...
and all I grasp is sand as I hit bottom...
theres no point to fight
Im lost, adrift,
waiting to drown....
in my sea of your memory.

Copyright © holderofthestone ... [ 2004-05-27 22:15:24]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Sea of your memory (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 05:42:05 AM AEST
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A wonderful poem great words

Well done

love Angelxxxxxxxx

Re: Sea of your memory (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 08:21:00 AM AEST
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Very good writing... thanks for sharing, reminds me of a poem I posted here a long time ago called "Drowning In A Lake of Misery"

Re: Sea of your memory (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 02:39:11 PM AEST
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holder - you're really growing your poetry-- the metaphor here is a lovely new twist. Nice, nice imagery! I am again impressed.

PS - I'd throw you a rope and pull you out... if I thought it'd reach. : )

Re: Sea of your memory (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 03:26:59 AM AEST
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I feel you on this one...

Re: Sea of your memory (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 04:54:59 AM AEST
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great words, great everything I loved everything about this one...!!!! MASTERPIECE!!!!
much love,
Dani
xoxoxo

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