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Smile
Contributed by
blackmarker
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Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 09:29:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You told me once
That Ive got a nice smile
Did mama never tell you its not nice to lie?
Telling that un-truth
That, in spite of myself
Drew the smile from me
The one you said is nice
But not when its fake
Its only nice when its genuine
I know youre lying though
Because all of my smiles are fake
None are honest and true
None are really happy
Its hard to be happy
When you hurt this bad.
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2004-05-27 21:29:43]
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Re: Smile
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by bttrflynajar on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 09:39:19 PM AEST
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| well i dont really know exactly how old you are, but this poem shows that you have true potential. The only thing is, maybe you need to work a little harder on your vocabulary? well just trying to help. |
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Re: Smile
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by bttrflynajar on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 09:55:18 PM AEST
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| im sorry for my previous comment. i should have read through your poem more thouraly before posting that, i feel like an idiot. |
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