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Array ( [sid] => 49385 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Still Fishing [time] => 2004-05-27 19:51:04 [hometext] => A Olds Womens ramblings.... [bodytext] => Under the sea Thats the place for me
Where bubbles and chuckles are all that matter.

Swim through the waves
there thundering roars free .
They roll and the crash up against the rocks , mixing with the foamy currents and me.
I dreamt I lived there and my friends were the fishes and we all went for a meeting in the cove one day.

Sat Mr Groper Fish ,he was the Judge .
With his big Pucker lips blowing bubbles by themselves
I thought he was sleeping,
his eyes were just slits .
Then suddenly there came a wave of Dolphins swim in.

"All are accounted for . Settled and been fed, "saluted the Biggest Gray Fin.
"Except this new one before you . She says-
She wants in."
Growing Bigger The Puffer Fish said,
"What is your business and What can you offer?"
"I ...,whispered me ,"I can offer only Happy Thoughts and Magic things "

"Magic and Song ? We Don't need them here.
You want that sort of thing you should be up there." He said pointing his fin.

"Up there Dear sir ",I whispered,
"Is where I began ."
"But I so wanted to join ,
The Sea Gang down here."

"Up there I had to speak , And use foolish words .
Words with double meaning and Words that weren't meant to hurt but did.
Like Trust, Love and I forgive."

I had this bright idea that if I were a fish ,My words will be found only on the expression of my face.

"What of Magic and Song ? How do you propose to do that?" asked the Judge accusingly.

"I thought prehap I might enlist the aide of the Moon.." but they didnt let me finish.

"A Way with you now . Your a strange One,
But I must say you speaking to me and your lips are not moving.. so whatever you are
there just may be a place for you here. "

For the simple reason being only
We'd liked to Lisen and Learn.

To be contuined

Whisper [comments] => 3 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 5 [informant] => Whisper [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ChildrensPoetry )
Still Fishing

Contributed by Whisper on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 07:51:04 PM in AEST
Topic: ChildrensPoetry



Under the sea Thats the place for me
Where bubbles and chuckles are all that matter.

Swim through the waves
there thundering roars free .
They roll and the crash up against the rocks , mixing with the foamy currents and me.
I dreamt I lived there and my friends were the fishes and we all went for a meeting in the cove one day.

Sat Mr Groper Fish ,he was the Judge .
With his big Pucker lips blowing bubbles by themselves
I thought he was sleeping,
his eyes were just slits .
Then suddenly there came a wave of Dolphins swim in.

"All are accounted for . Settled and been fed, "saluted the Biggest Gray Fin.
"Except this new one before you . She says-
She wants in."
Growing Bigger The Puffer Fish said,
"What is your business and What can you offer?"
"I ...,whispered me ,"I can offer only Happy Thoughts and Magic things "

"Magic and Song ? We Don't need them here.
You want that sort of thing you should be up there." He said pointing his fin.

"Up there Dear sir ",I whispered,
"Is where I began ."
"But I so wanted to join ,
The Sea Gang down here."

"Up there I had to speak , And use foolish words .
Words with double meaning and Words that weren't meant to hurt but did.
Like Trust, Love and I forgive."

I had this bright idea that if I were a fish ,My words will be found only on the expression of my face.

"What of Magic and Song ? How do you propose to do that?" asked the Judge accusingly.

"I thought prehap I might enlist the aide of the Moon.." but they didnt let me finish.

"A Way with you now . Your a strange One,
But I must say you speaking to me and your lips are not moving.. so whatever you are
there just may be a place for you here. "

For the simple reason being only
We'd liked to Lisen and Learn.

To be contuined

Whisper




Copyright © Whisper ... [ 2004-05-27 19:51:04]
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Re: Still Fishing (User Rating: 1 )
by mountainhigh on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 08:47:07 PM AEST
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I like this, makes me wish I was too.

Thanks for sharing.

Chris


Re: Still Fishing (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 08:57:40 PM AEST
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wow!
very impressive


Re: Still Fishing (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 03:26:58 AM AEST
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very interesting..I like it. venkat




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