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Array ( [sid] => 48907 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Make me beautiful [time] => 2004-05-24 13:24:20 [hometext] => I wrote this a while ago, it's about getting used and knowing that you're being used [bodytext] => Just a droplet of insecurity
An essence of your clumsy ways
Three strands of your thick, straggly hair
A tear you’ve tried crying for days
A jar of torturous memories
Trapped within bricks of an un-built future
Look at you just standing there
Numbed and pathetic without a care
No knife, no gun could stop you, dear
Yet I can plainly see you’re not really here
One small potion to make it fade
This kind of beauty is to be made
If only to be a pretty girl, I’ll do it all for you
And maybe if my potion works you’ll finally want me too
Put a limelight on my every flaw
You selfish child you strike me as odd
Drowning in the guilt of your unsuccessful suicide
Whispering “easy way out you self absorbed *****”
A smile so knowing and blood so rich
Please let me die
‘Cause I fail when I try
One small potion to make me fade
My kind of beauty is only to be made
Just to be a pretty girl, a superficial fool
Maybe once the potion works, I’ll be your perfect tool [comments] => 1 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 61 [informant] => carmen_queasy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Make me beautiful

Contributed by carmen_queasy on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 01:24:20 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Just a droplet of insecurity
An essence of your clumsy ways
Three strands of your thick, straggly hair
A tear you’ve tried crying for days
A jar of torturous memories
Trapped within bricks of an un-built future
Look at you just standing there
Numbed and pathetic without a care
No knife, no gun could stop you, dear
Yet I can plainly see you’re not really here
One small potion to make it fade
This kind of beauty is to be made
If only to be a pretty girl, I’ll do it all for you
And maybe if my potion works you’ll finally want me too
Put a limelight on my every flaw
You selfish child you strike me as odd
Drowning in the guilt of your unsuccessful suicide
Whispering “easy way out you self absorbed *****”
A smile so knowing and blood so rich
Please let me die
‘Cause I fail when I try
One small potion to make me fade
My kind of beauty is only to be made
Just to be a pretty girl, a superficial fool
Maybe once the potion works, I’ll be your perfect tool

Copyright Â© carmen_queasy ... [ 2004-05-24 13:24:20]
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Re: Make me beautiful (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 04:09:08 PM AEST
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not sure who you write this too, bf, child or friend, anyway, whoever they are, there is no such thing as perfect, always be true to you, hugs n' love nessa

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