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Array ( [sid] => 48898 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'm Sorry [time] => 2004-05-24 11:43:43 [hometext] => I wrote this awhile back when I was finding it hard to cope with my depression&I was taking it out on Mark. [bodytext] => I know that my words can hurt you sometimes,
Hatred call fall out of my mouth in rhymes,
You don’t deserve to be hurt in such a way,
So that the venomous words stay with you for days.

It’s just another nail in the fence,
Even after they’ve been pulled out the damage can be immense,
The words I have said right loud in my ears,
I hate myself and then come the tears.

I often wonder why you love me?
And why by my side is where you love to be,
Am I really worthy of your love,
That sings to me like a turtle dove.

I play back my words inside my head,
When I’m sat here or watching you sleeping in our bed,
And the guilt washes over me like a wave,
I feel pathetic and ashamed.

I’m sorry for lashing out at you,
When you’re the one who seen me though,
Seen me though all the stress and the worry,
Mark, I want you to know that I’m truly sorry!!!!



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I'm Sorry

Contributed by pixie on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 11:43:43 AM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry



I know that my words can hurt you sometimes,
Hatred call fall out of my mouth in rhymes,
You don’t deserve to be hurt in such a way,
So that the venomous words stay with you for days.

It’s just another nail in the fence,
Even after they’ve been pulled out the damage can be immense,
The words I have said right loud in my ears,
I hate myself and then come the tears.

I often wonder why you love me?
And why by my side is where you love to be,
Am I really worthy of your love,
That sings to me like a turtle dove.

I play back my words inside my head,
When I’m sat here or watching you sleeping in our bed,
And the guilt washes over me like a wave,
I feel pathetic and ashamed.

I’m sorry for lashing out at you,
When you’re the one who seen me though,
Seen me though all the stress and the worry,
Mark, I want you to know that I’m truly sorry!!!!







Copyright © pixie ... [ 2004-05-24 11:43:43]
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Re: I'm Sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 11:56:03 AM AEST
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you are a very good poet.


Re: I'm Sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by Troubadour on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 12:32:53 PM AEST
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this in my opinion was a very good way to say that your sorry.


Re: I'm Sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 01:34:46 PM AEST
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Yes... u are a very good poet... and this was a wonderful way to say... I'm sorry... just hope he heard it loud and clear...
~Donna~


Re: I'm Sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 02:37:32 PM AEST
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Loved it and a very nice way to say sorry as well.

My favorite part ,

It’s just another nail in the fence,
Even after they’ve been pulled out the damage can be immense,

~Kris~




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