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Array ( [sid] => 48805 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hero of my Fantasies [time] => 2004-05-23 15:46:44 [hometext] => This is inspired by Vitreous_Soul and the effect his writing has on me [bodytext] => I lay listlessly awake in the midnight hour
A feather bed and silken snow white skin
Teasing the frozen air my body to devour
Intoxicated by words that never seem to end

Raped of the feelings I wasnt ready to relinquish
For I had deliverd my heart to idols out west
Contradictory contemplations I cant seem to extinguish
My despondent heart eternally held in your duress

I want to endlessly inhale you until I cant breathe
Exceeding the most demanding depths of imagination
Enveloped in all that you and all that you'll be
Willingly consumed by your narration's incarceration

Emotions intensely ripped from remoteness inside
Unknowingly capturing expressionalistic philosophy
Seemingly effortless admission of things long denied
You will forever be the epitome, hero of my fantasies
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Hero of my Fantasies

Contributed by brigitte7735 on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 03:46:44 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

I lay listlessly awake in the midnight hour
A feather bed and silken snow white skin
Teasing the frozen air my body to devour
Intoxicated by words that never seem to end

Raped of the feelings I wasnt ready to relinquish
For I had deliverd my heart to idols out west
Contradictory contemplations I cant seem to extinguish
My despondent heart eternally held in your duress

I want to endlessly inhale you until I cant breathe
Exceeding the most demanding depths of imagination
Enveloped in all that you and all that you'll be
Willingly consumed by your narration's incarceration

Emotions intensely ripped from remoteness inside
Unknowingly capturing expressionalistic philosophy
Seemingly effortless admission of things long denied
You will forever be the epitome, hero of my fantasies

Copyright © brigitte7735 ... [ 2004-05-23 15:46:44]
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Re: Hero of my Fantasies (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 06:50:20 PM AEST
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Damn, V.S. - You've got a fan!

And how . . . W
hat can I say?
What a poem!

Re: Hero of my Fantasies (User Rating: 1 )
by TheNextRobertFrost on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 07:44:30 PM AEST
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This poem is wow

Re: Hero of my Fantasies (User Rating: 1 )
by forever_lonely on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 06:24:35 PM AEST
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Ah inspiration is but a simple thing when seen through the eyes of the gifted, you make this amazing piece seem so simple to write that even a mere child could produce it given the vocabulary of a god and the poetic brilliance of yourself

This is an intoxicating piece, to read it makes you feel as though every letter, every word runs through your viens like poison just waiting to take that final bite from deep within your soul

Another excellent piece, i love the word usage, the structure is beyond perfect, the rhythm is flawless, amazing would be but a simple statement for a much more complex and intricate write

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