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[aid] => mick
[title] => without you
[time] => 2002-10-10 14:00:00
[hometext] => well, i felt like expressing myself deeply! sometimes i feel like no-one understands how my life is. and here is my chance for ppl to read my poems and hopefully understand. thank you for reading. and only some poems i write are real. but some aren't. like this one.ppl who get there hearts broken everyday.
[bodytext] => there you sit and laugh with your friends. of all the times we had alone. but when i saw you with that other girl, my heart sank in deep sand. as i cryed u just sat there. watching and laughing at me with your friends. maybe i should commit suicide. or maybe i should just tell u how i feel. but would u understand. or would u just sit and make me feel bad. i guess im just not wanted in the world after all.
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without you
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Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 02:00:00 PM in AEST
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there you sit and laugh with your friends. of all the times we had alone. but when i saw you with that other girl, my heart sank in deep sand. as i cryed u just sat there. watching and laughing at me with your friends. maybe i should commit suicide. or maybe i should just tell u how i feel. but would u understand. or would u just sit and make me feel bad. i guess im just not wanted in the world after all.
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Re: without you
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by herbleaf23 on
Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 07:00:19 PM AEST
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hey mang, i totally understand. and what you need to know is that you don't need to let one person's opinion of you have such control over your life. or any other person's opinion of you other than your own, really, that's all that actually counts. and as long as YOU want yourself in the world, then, guess what, you're wanted in the world. by the way, I want you in the world too, so that's 2 now.
anyways go tell this person how you feel and if they just laugh at you, that's totally their probelm and you'll feel a thousand times better for being done with it. i promise.
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Re: without you
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by hot_topic on
Monday, 14th October 2002 @ 05:16:37 AM AEST
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