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You’d have known so much more
Then it would have been so clear
That it was you I longed for
You would have wanted, perhaps
To be with me evermore

In lieu of writing a poem of you
Foolish I tried instead to speak
You thought I’d be whole alone
You didn’t know I was weak
I realize that what I left unsaid
Brought this future bleak

Had I written a poem for you
It would have been much more
It should have continued along
Might have been me you cared for
And never would have come the day,
You said the words no more

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Had I Written a Poem for You

Contributed by Silent-No-More on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 11:27:22 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Had I written a poem for you
You’d have known so much more
Then it would have been so clear
That it was you I longed for
You would have wanted, perhaps
To be with me evermore

In lieu of writing a poem of you
Foolish I tried instead to speak
You thought I’d be whole alone
You didn’t know I was weak
I realize that what I left unsaid
Brought this future bleak

Had I written a poem for you
It would have been much more
It should have continued along
Might have been me you cared for
And never would have come the day,
You said the words no more

Copyright Â© Silent-No-More ... [ 2004-05-23 11:27:22]
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Re: Had I Written a Poem for You (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 11:30:25 AM AEST
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So emotional , very touching, Im sorry that you are going through the pain of a lost love :O( things will get better, time is a great healer.

takecare

Pixie xx

Re: Had I Written a Poem for You (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 11:38:10 AM AEST
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I think this is an awesome poem keep it up and keep it coming...you'll go far...
-Dani

Re: Had I Written a Poem for You (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 11:48:30 AM AEST
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absolutely beautifully written, a heartwrenching poem, hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-

Re: Had I Written a Poem for You (User Rating: 1 )
by reilt on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 12:23:02 PM AEST
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such a sad poem...really well written and filled with emotion. very very moving

Re: Had I Written a Poem for You (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 03:06:47 PM AEST
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I want to share with you something I wrote this morning. I think you will understand.
We don't know what might've been, and we have to face up to what is. It's not fun, but getting beyond it makes life so much better.
Stitch
Stone on Stone
What pressure is necessary
to force coal into diamond?
To mold a stone heart
into one that can feel?
Are our circumstances
equal to our own hardness?
Turn the crush inside out,
it is the balm that heals.

Re: Had I Written a Poem for You (User Rating: 1 )
by Justalady on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 04:46:58 PM AEST
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Words left unspoken... Hummmm. Nice poem and your right, writing a poem to someone is special indeed. Good thoughts here. June

Re: Had I Written a Poem for You (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 08:31:24 PM AEST
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someone I think very wise has recently made me realize if they dont notice it without throwing it in thier face....they may have not been meant to notice it.great poem

Re: Had I Written a Poem for You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 05:14:33 PM AEST
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So beautifully sad. Deep, touching and powerful. Very nice and written to perfection.

Take Care
- Becca

Re: Had I Written a Poem for You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 02:52:18 PM AEST
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This one would really deserve one of those not so random real hugs.

Its so sad.

Interesting how even the not so good things in life can inspire such a great poem.

I applaud you for being able to share your emotions with all of us.

Thank you,

Timber

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