Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	02-June 23:54:18 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 48700 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fire Burning Inside [time] => 2004-05-22 18:33:17 [hometext] => Please comment!!!!! [bodytext] => My hate for you,
Is like fire,
Burning greater and greater,
With every word you say,
With everything you do,
You spark the fire more and more,
I can't stop it,
The fie is uncontrolable,
Can the flame ever be put out,
Can I ever love you like I want to,
Will you ever treat me right,
Your adding to the fire every night,
Look at what you have done,
Does it make you happy,
To see me so down,
Does it make you feel better,
To make me feel worse,
Will things ever change,
Or will the fire inside of me,
Forever remain [comments] => 3 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 6 [informant] => DirtyFool [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Fire Burning Inside

Contributed by DirtyFool on Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 06:33:17 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

My hate for you,
Is like fire,
Burning greater and greater,
With every word you say,
With everything you do,
You spark the fire more and more,
I can't stop it,
The fie is uncontrolable,
Can the flame ever be put out,
Can I ever love you like I want to,
Will you ever treat me right,
Your adding to the fire every night,
Look at what you have done,
Does it make you happy,
To see me so down,
Does it make you feel better,
To make me feel worse,
Will things ever change,
Or will the fire inside of me,
Forever remain

Copyright © DirtyFool ... [ 2004-05-22 18:33:17]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Fire Burning Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 06:39:33 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

"What ever happened to the days of forgiveness;
grudges and quarrels all around me I see.
Saying your sorry seems to make you a weakling"
It makes me so sick all I do is grieve"

When you learn to give your heart
it always gets stomped on,
but that's no reason to write angry poems.

Re: Fire Burning Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Dierna on Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 07:03:40 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

That describes perfectly my feelings towards my mother at this time...thank you for writing it.

And angry poems are a way to express your anger with out lashing out at people.

Re: Fire Burning Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 09:39:32 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

just remember the fire can burn you alive or them alive. it will happen to either of you. yeah i bet you werent expecting this comment! well great write. nice indeedy.

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com