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Array ( [sid] => 48641 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Who are you? [time] => 2004-05-22 09:22:00 [hometext] => I am still that naive one.... hopefully more of you agree with me.... and my naivity [bodytext] => Who are you?
Who created you and why?
You´re past, present and fate
You are our black senselessness

You are here, in your naked unsightliness
Standing here, giving yourself airs
Who are you and who created you
Why don´t you pass away in your nothingness?

No, don´t look at me so,
You are something, what should never have been
We created you in our black thoughts
Longing to kill, not to live

You feed on blood and want power
You get it and we get no help
We pay our price, when we´re so naive
Sorry for those, who are innocent

Hopefully once we destroy you
Not with bullets, nor with guns
Love, with Love, and you die
We won´t feed you more, not us!!!

In our hearts, LOVE,
Spread over,
Don´t let her live, WAR,
Do not let, please, no…..

Kdo jsi?a odkud?
Kdo tě stvořil a proč?
Jsi minulost, přítomnost i osud,
Jsi naše černá nesmyslnost

Jsi tu ve své nahé ošklivosti,
Stojíš tu a tváříš se důležitě,
Proč tu jsi a kdo tě stvořil
Proč nezhyneš ve své prázdnotě?

Ne, nedívej se tak,
Jsi něco, co nikdy nemělo být
Stvořili jsme tě v černých myšlenkách
V touze ne žít, ale prostě zabít

Živíš se krví a chceš moc
Dostáváš to a my nemáme pomoc
Dobře nám tak, když jsme naivní
Škoda těch, jež jsou nevinní

Snad jednou, tebe zničíme my,
Ne kulkami, ne zbraněmi,
Láskou, láskou, a ty zhyneš,
Nebudem tě dál živit, ne my!!

V srdcích našich, Lásko,
Rozprostři se…
Nenech ji žít, Válku,
Prosím Tě, ne…..

[comments] => 9 [counter] => 215 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Aika [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => czech [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Who are you?

Contributed by Aika on Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 09:22:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Who are you?
Who created you and why?
You´re past, present and fate
You are our black senselessness

You are here, in your naked unsightliness
Standing here, giving yourself airs
Who are you and who created you
Why don´t you pass away in your nothingness?

No, don´t look at me so,
You are something, what should never have been
We created you in our black thoughts
Longing to kill, not to live

You feed on blood and want power
You get it and we get no help
We pay our price, when we´re so naive
Sorry for those, who are innocent

Hopefully once we destroy you
Not with bullets, nor with guns
Love, with Love, and you die
We won´t feed you more, not us!!!

In our hearts, LOVE,
Spread over,
Don´t let her live, WAR,
Do not let, please, no…..

Kdo jsi?a odkud?
Kdo tě stvořil a proč?
Jsi minulost, přítomnost i osud,
Jsi naše černá nesmyslnost

Jsi tu ve své nahé ošklivosti,
Stojíš tu a tváříš se důležitě,
Proč tu jsi a kdo tě stvořil
Proč nezhyneš ve své prázdnotě?

Ne, nedívej se tak,
Jsi něco, co nikdy nemělo být
Stvořili jsme tě v černých myšlenkách
V touze ne žít, ale prostě zabít

Živíš se krví a chceš moc
Dostáváš to a my nemáme pomoc
Dobře nám tak, když jsme naivní
Škoda těch, jež jsou nevinní

Snad jednou, tebe zničíme my,
Ne kulkami, ne zbraněmi,
Láskou, láskou, a ty zhyneš,
Nebudem tě dál živit, ne my!!

V srdcích našich, Lásko,
Rozprostři se…
Nenech ji žít, Válku,
Prosím Tě, ne…..





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Re: Who are you? (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 09:25:53 AM AEST
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Alot of emotion here, greatly expressed in your words.

I hope you find yourself soon,

takecare

Pixie xx


Re: Who are you? (User Rating: 1 )
by poet_of_anger on Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 09:35:18 AM AEST
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This is really nice, very well written.


Re: Who are you? (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 10:08:09 AM AEST
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beautifully heartfelt alena, im so happy to see you home again, ive missed you, have read your poem several times and each time i more agree with you, great write:) hugs n' lásko, nessa

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Re: Who are you? (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 11:07:22 AM AEST
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Good write, Aika...great to see you posting again....
Jenni


Re: Who are you? (User Rating: 1 )
by brown on Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 11:52:02 AM AEST
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the english bits made me smile cheers for that


Re: Who are you? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 05:44:46 PM AEST
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I've managed to read some of your work previous, and I thought you would be worth a read. I was right, as this is a very vocal expression of yourself. I really enjoyed reading it.

Keep writing.


Re: Who are you? (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 05:37:36 PM AEST
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Thank you for an awesome poem.


Re: Who are you? (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 12:38:06 AM AEST
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I go to your site each week, and nothing is posted there. I was so happy to read your poem, and know that you are home!
I've missed Aika.......how are your 3 dragons? This was an awesome poem. Really made me think......love will conquer all!
Great
Love you
ConSue


Re: Who are you? (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 09:04:37 AM AEST
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You write with a lot of passion for your subject aika.
Another piece strongly written .May you always keep the fire in your soul

steve
x




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