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Array ( [sid] => 4859 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Was I a Thought to Begin With [time] => 2002-10-10 07:00:00 [hometext] => **Repost from Old Site** [bodytext] => In a fleeting moment, you gave me life
One of many, I would be
I wondered, was I a thought to begin with
Was it possible, you really wanted me

I wondered this so many times
Because in me, you left much doubt
You'd make me feel I didn't belong
Far too often, I just wanted out

Many times I seen your anger
Your frustration and discontent, clear to see
Many times I felt the pain you caused
You always took it out on me

I know that you didn't love me
I hardly ever seen you smile
No recollection that you ever cared
These memories will stay with me a while

Was I even a thought to begin with
Or merely the end result
It wasn't my choice to be here
You created me, it's not my fault

©: Copyright 2000 Dale E. Price

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Was I a Thought to Begin With

Contributed by Chief on Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 07:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

In a fleeting moment, you gave me life
One of many, I would be
I wondered, was I a thought to begin with
Was it possible, you really wanted me

I wondered this so many times
Because in me, you left much doubt
You'd make me feel I didn't belong
Far too often, I just wanted out

Many times I seen your anger
Your frustration and discontent, clear to see
Many times I felt the pain you caused
You always took it out on me

I know that you didn't love me
I hardly ever seen you smile
No recollection that you ever cared
These memories will stay with me a while

Was I even a thought to begin with
Or merely the end result
It wasn't my choice to be here
You created me, it's not my fault

©: Copyright 2000 Dale E. Price

Copyright Â© Chief ... [ 2002-10-10 07:00:00]
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Re: Was I a Thought to Begin With (User Rating: 1 )
by ginsdance on Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 07:08:42 AM AEST
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I've felt like this at times... this poem conveys everything... I love the way you show all the pain... and frustration in it. Great write.
Ginsdance

Re: Was I a Thought to Begin With (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 10th October 2002 @ 07:14:53 AM AEST
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HI Dale, lovely to see you here again!! This is such a sad write, but it is so beautifully done. I hope you find the answers to your questions.and that they were positive ones...
Hugs,
Jenni

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