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My Destination
Contributed by
AliB
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Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 05:01:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I wander aimlessly through the night
Searching for my destination
Quietly hovering above the ground
Why do I not feel the grass beneath my feet?
I see a stranger in the dark
He looks right through me
Why cant he see?
In his face, no acknowledgement
Of my presence
What ignorance!
Desperation seeps into my soul
Where am I going?
Where have I been?
I think I know who I am
My memory is fading fast
I dont understand
Why can I not feel the wind on my face?
Smell the rain in the air?
Silence surrounds me
I cant hear my own heartbeat
Am I breathing?
Ive found my destination
My beautiful garden filled with love
At last I understand
I am at peace now
Calm and still
I am free
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AliB
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2004-05-21 17:01:08]
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Re: My Destination
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by Archie on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 05:11:32 PM AEST
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| For lack of phraseology it seems like you're dead, this is a great poem nonetheless. I like the fourth stanza best. |
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Re: My Destination
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 06:12:06 PM AEST
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beautiful, the way we all wish it to be....... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: My Destination
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by Dawny on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 01:23:35 AM AEST
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This is slightly different for you Ali, but great none the less. I like your imagery and descriptions.
Does the poem mean you're dead?? I like the first stanza best.
This is an excellent poem Ali, well done
Love Dawny x |
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