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[aid] => mick
[title] => Something Chemical
[time] => 2004-05-20 15:43:48
[hometext] => This was written as a response to an exam question at school of
[bodytext] => "It must have been something chemical", I hear the doctor say. There I lay, half dead, Half awake. Half listening. It wasn't like this, never was. Life used to be worth living, But all that worth was Washed out to sea. I used to enjoy it, days in the sun. I used to enjoy it, whilst I was a cake that was 'half done'. Now I'm done, as a cake, done with my life. The deaths which did surround me, Mother, Brother, Father, Lover. I became the fly, fascinated by the flame of disease. I became a contagious dark mood, Infecting the ones which did surround me. Spreading like malaria through a room of pure pupils. And only eye could see the cure, Death. Morbid thoughts all around me, Wondering what I had left. I took, and unwrapped, a newly bought knife, And used it on my chest. Scarification was so cool. It was the 'thing to do', I showed it to my friends, they were interested by the trend, But they couldn't see me screaming out in a physical form. All they saw was blood stained skin, I subliminaly infected them with my malaria sin. Quickly and heavily, Like a fat boy eats a cake, They took the depressant that was I. And drank the malaria intake. So I took it one step further, The cake was burning black. I took the same knife that i used before, Blood red stains upon the black Handle. Took it with my wrighting hand And sliced the artery down my arm, Tracing every last cappilary. I did it three times, After all, three's the charm. My head appeared heavy, The oxygen was wearing thin. And that's the last I remember, Before I woke up here. And that's the last I remember, When I was so near To taking my life, as if it were my own. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 148 [topic] => 13 [informant] => smickus [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
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