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Array ( [sid] => 48394 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Cut on the Dotted Line [time] => 2004-05-20 11:53:04 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I’m sorry were the words
That slipped from her lips
As her wrist dripped, from her fingertips

And I said it’s ok
Cuz I know that one day
I’ll take you away from this

And with every drop that hit the sink
The walls of my heart would start to shrink
And she looked at me as if she were dead
And through crying eyes she slowly said

How can we dance on broken glass
How can we fly on broken wings
How can we love with broken hearts
How can we feel anything

Don’t apologize
Just wipe your eyes
I understand that you feel at times

But I need you here
Don’t disappear
Just hold my hand for one more year
And I’ll show you
I love you
I’m always thinking of you
Just stay, don’t leave
Just stitch it up don’t bleed

Cuz with red and silver dreams
We can make it to the end
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 34 [informant] => paper-heart-hero [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
Cut on the Dotted Line

Contributed by paper-heart-hero on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 11:53:04 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



I’m sorry were the words
That slipped from her lips
As her wrist dripped, from her fingertips

And I said it’s ok
Cuz I know that one day
I’ll take you away from this

And with every drop that hit the sink
The walls of my heart would start to shrink
And she looked at me as if she were dead
And through crying eyes she slowly said

How can we dance on broken glass
How can we fly on broken wings
How can we love with broken hearts
How can we feel anything

Don’t apologize
Just wipe your eyes
I understand that you feel at times

But I need you here
Don’t disappear
Just hold my hand for one more year
And I’ll show you
I love you
I’m always thinking of you
Just stay, don’t leave
Just stitch it up don’t bleed

Cuz with red and silver dreams
We can make it to the end




Copyright © paper-heart-hero ... [ 2004-05-20 11:53:04]
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Re: Cut on the Dotted Line (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 12:26:37 PM AEST
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excellent write! do you have a band? send me a pm or something.. love the song..


Re: Cut on the Dotted Line (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 12:37:47 PM AEST
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wow... this is heavy, strong encouragement for those who desperately need it... awesome writing...
~Remy~


Re: Cut on the Dotted Line (User Rating: 1 )
by full_blur on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 02:18:23 PM AEST
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this is very heavy, but I think it would make a beautiful and very moving song. The refrain is quite touching, I think it brings the whole piece together.


Re: Cut on the Dotted Line (User Rating: 1 )
by painfullyme on Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 09:22:52 PM AEST
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i remember this one. it's gets better with every read. post more. i've missed reading your stuff


Re: Cut on the Dotted Line (User Rating: 1 )
by xSlashXPrettyXSkinx on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 04:41:57 PM AEST
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James, OMG! This is like the best one of yours I have EVER EVER read. This is so beautiful. Wow. I love it James. Thats great. I didnt realize until just now how much I missed your poetry and this site. Thank you.

Lindsey




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