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Array ( [sid] => 48172 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Plastic Lips [time] => 2004-05-19 00:27:19 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Feet will pace
so very quick
(Now I have no room to)
trip,
so many things
to do, so many things to keep me
going...
(love this bloody river flowing)
success, a smile,
doing, knowing...
Through plastic lips,
no breath to only
keep on showing
keep on showing

"Yes we see"
(you say
that you know
that)
everything is going good,
everything is going
well outside,
while inside
everything is going
everything is going

this will not keep
i cannot keep
going, everything is...
crumbling, fading, falling,
I'm crying, hating, calling --

Please let me
shatter
me, this smile gone,
now let it fall because

i cannot stop
this, everything
is going...

[comments] => 5 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 61 [informant] => SensitiveSoAbused [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Plastic Lips

Contributed by SensitiveSoAbused on Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 12:27:19 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Feet will pace
so very quick
(Now I have no room to)
trip,
so many things
to do, so many things to keep me
going...
(love this bloody river flowing)
success, a smile,
doing, knowing...
Through plastic lips,
no breath to only
keep on showing
keep on showing

"Yes we see"
(you say
that you know
that)
everything is going good,
everything is going
well outside,
while inside
everything is going
everything is going

this will not keep
i cannot keep
going, everything is...
crumbling, fading, falling,
I'm crying, hating, calling --

Please let me
shatter
me, this smile gone,
now let it fall because

i cannot stop
this, everything
is going...

Copyright © SensitiveSoAbused ... [ 2004-05-19 00:27:19]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Plastic Lips (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 12:56:27 AM AEST
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Verry interesting, thought provoking write.
peace,joy,
emy

Re: Plastic Lips (User Rating: 1 )
by JT on Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 02:28:10 AM AEST
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nice write. the words just flowed.....

Re: Plastic Lips (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 03:41:55 AM AEST
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Very cool and rhythmic flow of words there, it gives intensity and depth to the poem. Great write.

Re: Plastic Lips (User Rating: 1 )
by Another_Dimension on Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 09:45:04 AM AEST
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Ive said it before, i'll say it again. I like your style. this was very good, i like the way you tilt the letters and space them out and what not. Great! x x x

Re: Plastic Lips (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 01:51:05 PM AEST
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this seems sad to me...maybe im reading it wrong though...i think this flows very well. can i ask though? whats it about?

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