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Pills.. the silent end
Contributed by
heartfilledblood
on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 10:13:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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As I look at you
What you can do
The power that can undo
Undo this mess
I call a life
I know why Im here
No one will help
All too end
With one big gulp
My life a ruin
Because of you
You never knew
What I thought
A life a ruin
Because of you
Now I sit
As the screen is lit
And I think and sit
Your my life
A life bound too you
A simple game
You''ve kept me alive
But for so long
As I think
Of who Im leaving
One person comes too mind
My only sister
No one matters for they have set me here
As I look at you
The exit for fools.
Copyright ©
heartfilledblood
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2004-05-18 22:13:56]
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Re: Pills.. the silent end
(User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 05:28:14 AM AEST
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wow thank you for sharing such a powerful poem. this hit me so hard the many times i have tried but always thought of one person that i cannot bare to leave. if you ever need to talk to anyone send me a message.
love and hugs
XgenX |
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Re: Pills.. the silent end
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by shorty_52 on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 07:44:42 PM AEST
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o daric this is really good. really sad and i'm glad that u didn't commit it. i wouldn't be able to date a dead guy. and i'm glad that u thought of Teylor and i'm sure if she knew she would be to.
i love you so much so don't do any thing that u will regrett any time soon.
xoxo
~allyson~ |
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