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Array ( [sid] => 47911 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hello God [time] => 2004-05-17 12:34:55 [hometext] => To God Why did you do this to me [bodytext] => Hello God, are you there?
Why did you let her kill herself
did you not want to be with
her anymore
did you not want to be her f
ather anymore

Hello God, Are you there
are you standing right
next to me like my
friends are telling me you are
Are you there watching
me cry a million tears
because of everything
that has happened.

Hello God, I bet your phone
would never stop ringing
me and everyone else
wants to know what
your thinking did you
not say that you sent
your son to die for our
sins and then turn
away from me when
I really needed you the most.

Hello God, are you there
You let a life disappear into air
Hello God, whats going on
Aren't the weak supose to
be protected by the strong?
This can't be real
I really wonder
If you could give me your number

Hello God, What did she say
What were her words when she
reached hell could you just tell me
why she had to go to hell
why did she have to kill herself

Did you not want her anymore
Did you not care for her anymore
What happened to her
What made her think that
her life was useful
What made her hurt so
much that she was in
so much pain that she
had to end her own life?

Hello God, are you there
Did you forget everything
that I need to say
that I haven't had the
chance yet.

Hello God she was so loved
She was only one who
could make me smile
when I was sad.
God the phone is in my hand
won't you give me your number
Tell me what she says from hell
can't you tell me why she had to do it.

Hello God, did you forget
did you forget about me
did you forget that I was
crying so many
tears all for the years
that we where friends
did you forget that I was
still down here on earth
waiting for you to
answer your phone
and answer all of my
questions.

Hello God, are you there
are here for me.

Hello God, won't you please call
me and tell me whats going on.

Hello God
Hello God
Hello God
Hello God
Hello God
Hello God
Hello God
Hello God
Hello God
Hello God
Hello God
Hello God won't you please answer me
Answer the phone God, please pick it up
I bet its ringing off the hook making you
just want to take it and through it across
heaven.

Hello God, everyone and there mothers want
to answer to why she was in so much pain that she had to end her own life

Hello God
Hello God
Hello God
Hello God
Hello God
Hello God
Hello God
Hello God
Hello God
Hello God
Hello God
Hello God please just answer the phone for me please Father please answer the one
Did you forget
Did you forget everything that I was trying to say to you
Did you forget all the pain that I am in right now because you took her away from me.
Did you just plain forget that she was the one asking for help

Hello God, are you there.


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Hello God

Contributed by lildrama04 on Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 12:34:55 PM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry



Hello God, are you there?
Why did you let her kill herself
did you not want to be with
her anymore
did you not want to be her f
ather anymore

Hello God, Are you there
are you standing right
next to me like my
friends are telling me you are
Are you there watching
me cry a million tears
because of everything
that has happened.

Hello God, I bet your phone
would never stop ringing
me and everyone else
wants to know what
your thinking did you
not say that you sent
your son to die for our
sins and then turn
away from me when
I really needed you the most.

Hello God, are you there
You let a life disappear into air
Hello God, whats going on
Aren't the weak supose to
be protected by the strong?
This can't be real
I really wonder
If you could give me your number

Hello God, What did she say
What were her words when she
reached hell could you just tell me
why she had to go to hell
why did she have to kill herself

Did you not want her anymore
Did you not care for her anymore
What happened to her
What made her think that
her life was useful
What made her hurt so
much that she was in
so much pain that she
had to end her own life?

Hello God, are you there
Did you forget everything
that I need to say
that I haven't had the
chance yet.

Hello God she was so loved
She was only one who
could make me smile
when I was sad.
God the phone is in my hand
won't you give me your number
Tell me what she says from hell
can't you tell me why she had to do it.

Hello God, did you forget
did you forget about me
did you forget that I was
crying so many
tears all for the years
that we where friends
did you forget that I was
still down here on earth
waiting for you to
answer your phone
and answer all of my
questions.

Hello God, are you there
are here for me.

Hello God, won't you please call
me and tell me whats going on.

Hello God
Hello God
Hello God
Hello God
Hello God
Hello God
Hello God
Hello God
Hello God
Hello God
Hello God
Hello God won't you please answer me
Answer the phone God, please pick it up
I bet its ringing off the hook making you
just want to take it and through it across
heaven.

Hello God, everyone and there mothers want
to answer to why she was in so much pain that she had to end her own life

Hello God
Hello God
Hello God
Hello God
Hello God
Hello God
Hello God
Hello God
Hello God
Hello God
Hello God
Hello God please just answer the phone for me please Father please answer the one
Did you forget
Did you forget everything that I was trying to say to you
Did you forget all the pain that I am in right now because you took her away from me.
Did you just plain forget that she was the one asking for help

Hello God, are you there.






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Re: Hello God (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 01:00:53 PM AEST
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hello lildrama......
Your words speak in volumes my dear friend. We all wonder why life ends, but I think God would tell you that He is never to busy to answer the phone. He seems soooooo far away when He is right there in your heart, or you wouldn't be calling him. I am so sorry to hear about your friend. We all make choices in life, not always the best choices, but everyone gets hurt when bad choices are made. Our only choice is to make the right choice in what we do. You are writing to express pain, and you are calling upon God to comfort you. All good choices. My prayers are with you and all that hurt at this time of grief.Please know....God is listening....
Angel always...godspeed my friend...joni


Re: Hello God (User Rating: 1 )
by Black13 on Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 01:04:26 PM AEST
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This was powerful.
I'm sorry for your loss.
I won't preach like others may...
Good write and I hope you make it through this alright.
It never seems fair no matter how they are taken.




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