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Hannah And Tara, Are You Safe???

Contributed by deathdrop on Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 10:58:09 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Tara and Hannah have run away again!
Jaz says not to worry, but I dont think theyre safe!
Laura says to leave it!
But can I?
Hannah said shed phone me!
But she hasnt, and I wonder why!!!
I wanted to go with them!
I wanted to run away!
Didnt know what Id do.
Didnt know where Id stay.
Jaz persuaded me not to.
I wish that Id have gone!
That way Id know that theyre ok!
And I wouldnt hurt. Hurting is so wrong!!!

We helped them to get away!
The school didnt even know that theyd gone!
I didnt say not to, coz that would make me a waas,
But, Im scared now coz hours have gone.
Maybe I am a waas.
Maybe theres some thing wrong with me!
I just know I slit my wrists when they werent found last week.
But the pain wouldnt go from me!!

Lauras mums a copper!
Laura sounded like she barely cares!
She said to let them get on with it!
How can I zip it?
And not rip out my hair?
She said to phone her later.
If Im still worried then.
Does she really not care?
Unless I get worked up, again.

Theyve packed their bags and everything.
Theyve got money, to push them on their way.
They didnt say where theyd go to.
But they did say they were going miles away!
They said theyd stay at a mates house.
Then later get on the train.
Leave this life behind them!
But they promised me,
They wouldnt be rapped




Copyright © deathdrop ... [ 2004-05-17 10:58:09]
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Re: Hannah And Tara, Are You Safe??? (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 10:56:15 PM AEST
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No News is Good News dear, they can handle this I'm sure.
They are probably just so busy surviving they haven't time to find a stamp and write.
You'll hear from them soon I'll bet.
I loved your poem.......a marvelous heartfelt write.
Don't worry......you'll hear.....they are just fine, they are all right
Love you
consue


Re: Hannah And Tara, Are You Safe??? (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 01:28:18 PM AEST
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I echoe lovingcritter, they'll be fine. this really touches me.hope everything turns out ok. x




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