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Array ( [sid] => 47867 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Monster from my loneliness [time] => 2004-05-17 02:07:57 [hometext] => Please read it and give your comment..... [bodytext] => Yet another night of my life, with my loneliness

Years and years my nights have been like this

I feel the cold of outside, frozen deep within me

And the hurtful silence wounding myself cruelly

The clock is clicking and the dogs are barking

Far away, I hear a little baby loudly crying

Now it’s time the monster comes for it's visit

It comes from nowhere but from my own closet

When it comes in front of me I m really terrified

I try my best to escape, I try to run and hide

But all in-vain, every time it succeeds in clutching me

And it drags me down to my memory lane, brutally

I plead, I sigh and I cry, I don’t want to be here

But the monster does not have any eye or ear

Now I sense each of my pain I have been through

I have to look into the eyes of whom I m avoiding, too

Now I m back from the visit of my memory town

The monster has finished all of it’s work and it’s gone

I am left wounded and battered by visiting my pain

But what to do, each night the monster comes to me again

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Monster from my loneliness

Contributed by Kusum on Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 02:07:57 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Yet another night of my life, with my loneliness

Years and years my nights have been like this

I feel the cold of outside, frozen deep within me

And the hurtful silence wounding myself cruelly

The clock is clicking and the dogs are barking

Far away, I hear a little baby loudly crying

Now it’s time the monster comes for it's visit

It comes from nowhere but from my own closet

When it comes in front of me I m really terrified

I try my best to escape, I try to run and hide

But all in-vain, every time it succeeds in clutching me

And it drags me down to my memory lane, brutally

I plead, I sigh and I cry, I don’t want to be here

But the monster does not have any eye or ear

Now I sense each of my pain I have been through

I have to look into the eyes of whom I m avoiding, too

Now I m back from the visit of my memory town

The monster has finished all of it’s work and it’s gone

I am left wounded and battered by visiting my pain

But what to do, each night the monster comes to me again

Copyright Â© Kusum ... [ 2004-05-17 02:07:57]
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Re: Monster from my loneliness (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 02:12:58 AM AEST
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so vivid and emotional yet so heartbreaking. Seems there are many of late that are so sad.I hate to see this and I hope your tears go away soon noone deserves these kinds of hurts.

Michelle

Re: Monster from my loneliness (User Rating: 1 )
by Alisialynn on Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 02:22:29 AM AEST
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Nice write. Sad, I know how you feel.

What's done is done, the past you can't change. I do this little exercize when memories start to get me down, I force myself to stop thinking about them. Instead I chant in my head over and over again, "What's done is done." It's simple but it's been working.

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