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By: Danielle

This is not a letter
It isn’t anything better
My notes to say
My ***** up life
Has come to and end
I have died
But you have been nothing
But a great friend
I’m sorry
For all the straight faced lies
It was something I had to do
To get me by
I’m sorry
For making you cry
But my life wasn’t lived to it’s fullest
But I’m gone
On another journey
Something better
Tell my friends
They filled my life with happiness
I’m so sorry
It had to end like this
Tell them my life was filled with tryst
I’m on a journey
I felt before like a locked up beast
You’re the one
That made my life easy
I let the skin slip
I let the blood drip
Every now and then I’d take a sip,
Not of my blood
But of life
Breath in
the crimson leaked
The floor tilted
My mind forgot
About everything
Every problem
And focused on mine
This suicidal note
Is not to be taken
For sympathy
But for truth
My life and soul
Lost its youth
How does it feel to be you now?
Answer this question
When I’m lowered
And released
Act like it’s you
Who lost everything willingly
For everything better than this
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A Suicidal Note

Contributed by Living_In_My_Dream on Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 12:43:37 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

"A Suicidal note"
By: Danielle

This is not a letter
It isn’t anything better
My notes to say
My ***** up life
Has come to and end
I have died
But you have been nothing
But a great friend
I’m sorry
For all the straight faced lies
It was something I had to do
To get me by
I’m sorry
For making you cry
But my life wasn’t lived to it’s fullest
But I’m gone
On another journey
Something better
Tell my friends
They filled my life with happiness
I’m so sorry
It had to end like this
Tell them my life was filled with tryst
I’m on a journey
I felt before like a locked up beast
You’re the one
That made my life easy
I let the skin slip
I let the blood drip
Every now and then I’d take a sip,
Not of my blood
But of life
Breath in
the crimson leaked
The floor tilted
My mind forgot
About everything
Every problem
And focused on mine
This suicidal note
Is not to be taken
For sympathy
But for truth
My life and soul
Lost its youth
How does it feel to be you now?
Answer this question
When I’m lowered
And released
Act like it’s you
Who lost everything willingly
For everything better than this

Copyright Â© Living_In_My_Dream ... [ 2004-05-17 00:43:37]
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Re: A Suicidal Note (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 12:59:26 AM AEST
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ohhhhhh this is so emotional and sad.
Ill tell you what Iv said many times
though things seem hard and at times
things seem the darkest never fear
if you pull through it the light will shine
your heart will be happy and there is a life
awaiting you thats so much better than whats
going on now.

Great write

Michelle

Re: A Suicidal Note (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 01:53:34 AM AEST
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I too was going to kill myself, but my boy helped me through :) and i love him so much.i can truly relate,ive wrote many suicide poems. thx for sharing.upsetting write x

Re: A Suicidal Note (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 03:11:50 AM AEST
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Ive spent my time on the blades edge. I love this poem hits home to me. thank you for sharing you know it really is amazing how one person can totally destroy anothers life....

Re: A Suicidal Note (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:25:12 PM AEST
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that's good...i really liked it

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