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[hometext] => Been through the site and everything seems like a haiku and not you!
[bodytext] => Most everybody on this site wanna write, but they can't incite what they be feelin. Writin haiku like it was how to. Whatever happen to doin you. See i write like I be freestylin. Most of you cats not understand because they wildin. Haven't been to the temple and had it this simple. Seems like a simpleton but not . On my knees like 100 degrees. Just praying for someone to come original til it make sense. Let it flow cause your heads not that tense. You wanna be deep , but if you can keep it shallow. Cause some of these poems is hollow.
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This Site
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Marcus493
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Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 09:02:50 PM in AEST
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Most everybody on this site wanna write, but they can't incite what they be feelin. Writin haiku like it was how to. Whatever happen to doin you. See i write like I be freestylin. Most of you cats not understand because they wildin. Haven't been to the temple and had it this simple. Seems like a simpleton but not . On my knees like 100 degrees. Just praying for someone to come original til it make sense. Let it flow cause your heads not that tense. You wanna be deep , but if you can keep it shallow. Cause some of these poems is hollow.
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Re: This Site
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by shelby on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 10:30:38 PM AEST
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this is different but I like it just the same.
None of us do anything the same whats good for one may not be good for another.... myself I enjoy everyones style and choice in the manner in which they write I havent found anyone I would say I didnt like.
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Re: This Site
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by thumper on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 11:59:07 PM AEST
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I like all different types of poetry just as I like all different types of music. I try to enjoy it all just as it's supposed to be enjoyed. Just like your poetry. It's different. I enjoyed it. But then again, I suppose I'm kinda eclectic! Peace!
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Re: This Site
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by bernard on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 01:18:54 AM AEST
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If you are going to write and criticise then set your own house in order first. What you have just placed on the site is unbelievably childish. I could say more but I will leave it at that.
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Re: This Site
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 04:31:03 PM AEST
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| Not to be antaganistic but your words are judgemental. You can almost be saying that if people do not write like you they are not meant to be poets. I can not agree with the thoughts of this poem no matter how good or bad it is. All it does is cause strife. You should be helping others and not tearing them down! |
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