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drain out the emotion
Contributed by
lexxie
on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 04:44:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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we're losing control
emotion is over coming our closed in minds
emotion seeping through the drains
into our hearts
and comes pouring out our eyes
and now feel the inside
it hurts
heart made of thorns
stabbing at our minds
draining out emotion
emotion becomes tears
cry
cry to the world
know one hears
stabbing thorns
beating hearts
failing to keep beating
dying
falling into nothing
black holes inside our stabbed
minds
now gravity kills
Copyright ©
lexxie
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2004-05-15 16:44:55]
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Re: drain out the emotion
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 04:48:53 PM AEST
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| i luv it. its so raw,and vibrant and true. |
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Re: drain out the emotion
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by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 06:15:46 PM AEST
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Another good poem.
Take care.
David |
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