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Array ( [sid] => 47646 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => the hidden me [time] => 2004-05-15 13:48:35 [hometext] => i wrote this for my L.A. class. [bodytext] => with my mask,
i hide at last.

my true self bound,
the true me never to be found.

you ask why im this way.
you ask me what i have to say.

when the answers i don't care.
you think nothing's there.

i hide for safety,
hid for comfort.

i am me.
unfortunately you'll never see.

when im sad you'll never know,
because my feelings i don't show.

your life's hard enff,
no need to worry about me.
that's why you'll never see.

i'm no longer young.
my wings are sprung.
i'm not the little girl you think i am.

im not what you see,
my mask hides me. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 207 [topic] => 21 [informant] => moon_light [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

the hidden me

Contributed by moon_light on Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 01:48:35 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

with my mask,
i hide at last.

my true self bound,
the true me never to be found.

you ask why im this way.
you ask me what i have to say.

when the answers i don't care.
you think nothing's there.

i hide for safety,
hid for comfort.

i am me.
unfortunately you'll never see.

when im sad you'll never know,
because my feelings i don't show.

your life's hard enff,
no need to worry about me.
that's why you'll never see.

i'm no longer young.
my wings are sprung.
i'm not the little girl you think i am.

im not what you see,
my mask hides me.

Copyright © moon_light ... [ 2004-05-15 13:48:35]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: the hidden me (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 01:51:05 PM AEST
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sad poem to me.
take the mask off let me see
I bet from the heart that you share
I bet anything YOUR BEAUTIFUL UNDER THERE.... good write sandy

Re: the hidden me (User Rating: 1 )
by matts_sweetie_04 on Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 02:06:25 PM AEST
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Good write. I think at one time or another we all wish we could hide from the world.

Re: the hidden me (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 10:47:58 AM AEST
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I know you hide but I also know that there is a very Beautiful person under that mask! I'll be asking you what grade you got. I really liked this. We all have a mask of one kind or another. But you really need to let your REAL self shine through more often. ((((((Jen))))))
Thumps ; 0 )

Re: the hidden me (User Rating: 1 )
by linagalMBfan01 on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 08:58:31 PM AEST
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i'm glad you wrote this and you are beautiful underneath. throw the mask away already.

your friend,
Lina

Re: the hidden me (User Rating: 1 )
by hellsfallenangel on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 10:54:32 PM AEST
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hey jen, thats a really good one but u really shouldnt hide behind a mask. Im the one who hides behind a mask around here, well ill put some more of my poems up when i get the chance ok ttyl bye

DEMON

Re: the hidden me (User Rating: 1 )
by Minus_Blindfold on Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 10:12:32 AM AEST
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This poemis alot like one of my friends poems "Reflecting Pool" by Grey_Matters.....check it out, i think you'll like it

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