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Contributed by
Living_In_My_Dream
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Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 11:07:26 PM in AEST
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By: Danielle
Sitting down on your couch
We started snuggling and making out
You slipped your hand across my cheek,
You made my knees feel so damn weak
I took your shirt off,
Grabbed your hand
All of a sudden you got mad
It took me a while to figure out
What this whole thing was about
You slit your wrist,
Think its no big deal
I finally say this cant be real
You seemed so perfect,
So figured out
I guess I didnt know what you were really about
What happened to the nights before?
You would kiss me outside your door
I thought I knew you guess not anymore
I finally say were moving to way fast
You say wait cmon its all in the past
Why didnt you tell me all this before?
I thought I knew you guess not anymore
You slit your wrist
Think its no big deal
I finally say this cant be real
You seemed so perfect
So figured out
I guess I didnt know what you were really about
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Re: Cut
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 01:04:05 AM AEST
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| this flows together really well. YOu've done a good job with the imgary, I can see this happening. The emotion is there too. Well done. |
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by holderofthestone on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 02:32:55 AM AEST
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| Deep. to some people that pain is whats real to them, and what they are really about. great poem.A+++ |
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by Dri on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 07:32:07 PM AEST
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'you seemed so perfect
so figured out'
i love that line! |
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by humboldtsweetie33 on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 09:28:22 PM AEST
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| I love it. its soo well written and detailed. great great write. you have a gift |
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