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Array ( [sid] => 47380 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => the real friend ?? [time] => 2004-05-13 16:53:05 [hometext] => Wrote this because this is true in so many cases [bodytext] => You said you'd be there for me,
But here I'am...alone as can be.
You said you'd be my eyez whenever I can't see,
But here I'am in the darkness, waitin to be set free.
You said that you would caught me if I eva fall,
But here I 'am fallin back on a wall.
You said you would help me back up, if I eva fall down,
But here I'am still layin on the ground.
I believed you when you said our friendship would burn like a bright light,
But i guess that light was so bright it blurred my sight.
I dont know why I always believe you; I dont know whyI took that risk,
I dont know why I believed in someone who could neva even exist [comments] => 2 [counter] => 141 [topic] => 32 [informant] => honeyrain [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

the real friend ??

Contributed by honeyrain on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 04:53:05 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

You said you'd be there for me,
But here I'am...alone as can be.
You said you'd be my eyez whenever I can't see,
But here I'am in the darkness, waitin to be set free.
You said that you would caught me if I eva fall,
But here I 'am fallin back on a wall.
You said you would help me back up, if I eva fall down,
But here I'am still layin on the ground.
I believed you when you said our friendship would burn like a bright light,
But i guess that light was so bright it blurred my sight.
I dont know why I always believe you; I dont know whyI took that risk,
I dont know why I believed in someone who could neva even exist

Copyright © honeyrain ... [ 2004-05-13 16:53:05]
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Re: the real friend ?? (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 04:57:33 PM AEST
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its one of the hardest things in the world to endure when someone doesnt go the same distance we go with them. Im sorry for your pain you expressed your emotions well in this poem.

Michelle

Re: the real friend ?? (User Rating: 1 )
by XxPerfectlySanexX on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 04:59:23 PM AEST
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Awwww, that poem really hit me.
Especially the last line - reminded me of a really strong internet love i've just gone through. I really relate to this, and if you're going through it to, don't worry hun things'll get better!
Take loadsa care and keep writing,
For the sake of putting a smile on everyones face!
Love,
PerfectlySanex (Love your poems)!

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