Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	02-June 23:38:05 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 47207 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mystical moments [time] => 2004-05-12 13:45:39 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Right here is where I'm standing,
this life is so demanding,
submit those fictional feelings
disposable truths
and honest lies
handful of pain, regret, goodbyes.
But to move way from yesterday,
what a wonderful thought.
This is reflected by my mystical moments..
with you.....
With you I'm not a woman,
with you I'm not a man.
With you I'm always silly,
just because I can.
You see that I'm pretense,
you never have to ask.
You see what I allow no one else,
you see I wear a mask.
You see I'm irresponcible,
you see that I am weak,
you see that I'm a liar, a traitor and a freak.
But I don't question this,
your ability to see,
the internal side of who I am,
and love me just for me.
You see when I am angry,
scratching out your eyes...
you see what I see in myself,
all that I despise.
It doesn't matter what the world wants to see,
I'm just blessed and happy eternally,
that someone could love me
for me. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 43 [informant] => broken-glass [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Mystical moments

Contributed by broken-glass on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 01:45:39 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Right here is where I'm standing,
this life is so demanding,
submit those fictional feelings
disposable truths
and honest lies
handful of pain, regret, goodbyes.
But to move way from yesterday,
what a wonderful thought.
This is reflected by my mystical moments..
with you.....
With you I'm not a woman,
with you I'm not a man.
With you I'm always silly,
just because I can.
You see that I'm pretense,
you never have to ask.
You see what I allow no one else,
you see I wear a mask.
You see I'm irresponcible,
you see that I am weak,
you see that I'm a liar, a traitor and a freak.
But I don't question this,
your ability to see,
the internal side of who I am,
and love me just for me.
You see when I am angry,
scratching out your eyes...
you see what I see in myself,
all that I despise.
It doesn't matter what the world wants to see,
I'm just blessed and happy eternally,
that someone could love me
for me.

Copyright © broken-glass ... [ 2004-05-12 13:45:39]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Mystical moments (User Rating: 1 )
by kailadragon on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 01:50:04 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I really like this poem. I think everyone just wants to be loved for who they are

Re: Mystical moments (User Rating: 1 )
by StoneAngel on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 02:04:48 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

What a great poem keep it up/

Re: Mystical moments (User Rating: 1 )
by dolly_dagger on Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 04:19:01 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

lol! they weren't ALL fictional. Nice writing. Definitely describes the atmosphere right now.
love u loads
xxxxxxxxxxxx

Re: Mystical moments (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 05:42:24 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

wow i love your poetry as you say you love mine. well you have now seen the little genna side of me. she's kinda wild huh! good write!

love and hugs
XgenX

Re: Mystical moments (User Rating: 1 )
by chanceof_promise on Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 11:03:23 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

i like this one a lot..
i havent really been love for who i am yet..i have gotten close but then the guy always freaks out about a commentiment (sp) and backs away..so havent found it yet..
but i love the poem..i like your use of words..they take me somewhere else when i read it..and i like that feeling..

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com