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Tell me lies and complicate this.
I'm a child let's sacrifice me.
Cupid is a sick sadistic *****.

Bind me up just to please you.
Slit my wrists to appease your senses.
Buried my hope just to hold your hand.
On my soul your sex is poison.

Rape my mind, break me down.
Bloodied black roses adorn your gown.
Slit my throat release me now.
Didn't you know masochists burn themselves.

Please cut me just a little more.
Little girl don't stop now.
I'm inside bleeding with you.
Leaving fuchsia stains on the wall.

Lay me down but not to sleep
one more cut to make me weep.
Smile as pure as heavens end.
Clean me up so I can be beat again.

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Dark Lover

Contributed by Black13 on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 03:38:32 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I've burned my world now recreate it.
Tell me lies and complicate this.
I'm a child let's sacrifice me.
Cupid is a sick sadistic *****.

Bind me up just to please you.
Slit my wrists to appease your senses.
Buried my hope just to hold your hand.
On my soul your sex is poison.

Rape my mind, break me down.
Bloodied black roses adorn your gown.
Slit my throat release me now.
Didn't you know masochists burn themselves.

Please cut me just a little more.
Little girl don't stop now.
I'm inside bleeding with you.
Leaving fuchsia stains on the wall.

Lay me down but not to sleep
one more cut to make me weep.
Smile as pure as heavens end.
Clean me up so I can be beat again.

Copyright © Black13 ... [ 2004-05-11 15:38:32]
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Re: Dark Lover (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 04:03:18 PM AEST
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f*ck yeah!
this was awesome, so gruesome and chilling. i loved it!
i hope i see more like this. *evil smile*
Arden

Re: Dark Lover (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 04:18:05 PM AEST
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Read it. Brilliant dark work, Black. Could this be someone we know?? Huh, teddy bear?

Rita

Re: Dark Lover (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 04:33:14 PM AEST
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This is too...umm, I can't say the word. I'm a good Christian girl from New England. Too much. Let's say that. I see the masochist has reared...no, let me rephrase that...has whimpered...no, that's not right...well, you get my drift.
Stitch

Re: Dark Lover (User Rating: 1 )
by Putteragain on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 04:46:42 PM AEST
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Dark and icky full of sadness not my flavor but still an excellent write good flow and well expressed

: )
michelle

Re: Dark Lover (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowDaughter on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 04:56:53 PM AEST
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Me like . . . a lot. Well-written and sent shivers up my spine . . . good job :).

--Nora

Re: Dark Lover (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 10:21:00 PM AEST
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Wow, such an impact these words had. Man, evil and sadictic. This is the epitome of dark poetry. Your words still haunt me.

Re: Dark Lover (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 01:08:42 AM AEST
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very strong..powerful..dazzling.."one more cut to make me weep.Smile as pure as heavens end.Clean me up so I can be beat again"..
great cry. venkat

Re: Dark Lover (User Rating: 1 )
by JennyFruFru on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 10:18:27 AM AEST
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this is awesome... nothing like a little S&M to get ya going... lol nice job... :) :) :)

Re: Dark Lover (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 05:34:09 PM AEST
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Lords of Acid ROCK!!! I asume you were refering to Dark Lover Rising. But anyway, this is beyound great! I love this. Good old S&M, takes me back...good times.

Re: Dark Lover (User Rating: 1 )
by frohemiasweetie on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 02:02:41 PM AEST
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Wow. I am going to take for granted that it was meant literally and say that I hope you left that heifer alone. I like the poem, though.

Re: Dark Lover (User Rating: 1 )
by AWaiTinG13FaTe on Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 01:44:27 AM AEST
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I LOVE IT! i have thoughts like this all the time just havent put them into a poem yet. i look forward to reading you other stuff!

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