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Loreleilied
Contributed by
Drive_By
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Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 02:29:51 AM in AEST
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schne Lorelei
von den heimlichen Wldern
verurteilende
dein Lied widerhallt,
s und klar, bei den Fle
von hohen Bumen,
Heilig und gesund
du gibst jedem Matrose
Tod, auf deinem Fels
meine Sehnsucht nun
ist nach dir, deiner Gesicht
ist jetzt meinen Gral
Ein Leidtragender
wr ich sein, heimgesucht in
meiner Traurigkeit
du wirst mich fhren
zu einem wssrigem Grab
Leben gtauscht, fr dich.
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Re: Loreleilied
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by Hurretje on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 05:09:36 AM AEST
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So romantisch...todliche Liebe...
Grüsse,
Hur |
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Re: Loreleilied
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 05:22:57 AM AEST
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ok, i'm confused now...
i don't think i know this language..
but I do know the whole lorelei thing...
it's in a book i read i'm sure...
hmm, was it lord of the rings?
*looks doubtfully at monitor*
i have no idea..
nor do i undertsand the words...
but nevertheless, thanks for sharing...
grateful but befuddled 13 year old girl,
katie |
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Re: Loreleilied
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by liquidsunshine on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 07:02:12 PM AEST
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It's a pitty I didn't stick with German classes.
I was intrigued by the title. I know of the Lorelei she-bang. I just thought it was a pretty name, no matter the connotations. Someday I'll name my daughter Lorelei.
I wrote a poem about a friend but disguised her name as Lorelei Amaya because she's a bit shy and wouldn't want her name on the net. Anyway... Thanks for sharing.
Bravo and encore,
love,
Chelsea |
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