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Array ( [sid] => 46963 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => They way you make me feel [time] => 2004-05-10 19:01:04 [hometext] => she wrote it but scared to show it tell her how u feel towards it [bodytext] => So restless at night, when I dream of you
I open my eyes, hoping it came true.
It didn't again so with tears in my eyes
I hold my pillow to soften the cries.

But distance means nothing in love that's true
And though I long for one touch from you,
I'll squeeze that pillow while we're apart,
You hold me too, you hold my heart.

No one has ever made me feel so complete,
My whole life was lived just so we could meet.
I'll dream of you now, on into the night,
Hoping that soon you'll be holding me tight.

My dreams will come true one day, I know,
Just hold me close, and never let go.
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They way you make me feel

Contributed by spaz1226 on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 07:01:04 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

So restless at night, when I dream of you
I open my eyes, hoping it came true.
It didn't again so with tears in my eyes
I hold my pillow to soften the cries.

But distance means nothing in love that's true
And though I long for one touch from you,
I'll squeeze that pillow while we're apart,
You hold me too, you hold my heart.

No one has ever made me feel so complete,
My whole life was lived just so we could meet.
I'll dream of you now, on into the night,
Hoping that soon you'll be holding me tight.

My dreams will come true one day, I know,
Just hold me close, and never let go.

Copyright © spaz1226 ... [ 2004-05-10 19:01:04]
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Re: They way you make me feel (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 07:11:02 PM AEST
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Great poem of love and devotion.

Re: They way you make me feel (User Rating: 1 )
by Justalady on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 07:20:01 PM AEST
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Oh the ache when one is apart from the one they love. This is done very well and speaks in an open frank way of the pangs of love not being near . June

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