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Array ( [sid] => 4664 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Rejected II [time] => 2002-10-06 07:10:00 [hometext] => The ramblings of rejection from a broken heart. A second attempt at heartache. [bodytext] => I sit at my computer,
listening to Matchbox 20
Wishing life was better,
Missing out on plenty.
My heart's a beating pulp,
All mangled and misused,
Thoughts of her still make me gulp,
My emotions are all bruised.
I don't want to live,
And I don't want to die.
I got nothing left to give,
And what I feel is a lie.
Why can't life just deal me straight,
Why must I always pay,
These feelings are an awful weight,
And yet they always stay.
I take it all inside of me,
I'm about to explode,
Why can't anyone see,
I want my story told.
Now I live for my dreams,
'cause I know she's always there,
But when I come back it seems,
I can only feel despair.
Sometimes I want to feel the pain,
outside the way I feel inside,
Doing stupid things again,
Just to replace the ache inside.
I need her now, here in my arms,
to fill the empty place in me,
I ned to feel he sweet charms,
To stop the ache and be free.
I guess that's it,
There is no cure
I guess that's it,
I'm finished for sure.
I'm dead with a heartbeat,
trying not to breathe,
Every second i greet,
brings me closer to peace.
There's no point without her,
so why carry on,
But maybe one day, I'm not sure,
this distance will be gone.
Maybe she'll see me and then,
I'll have a reason to live,
So now I dream again,
Until I can no longer give.

By: Doug Morton
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Rejected II

Contributed by wordpoet on Sunday, 6th October 2002 @ 07:10:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I sit at my computer,
listening to Matchbox 20
Wishing life was better,
Missing out on plenty.
My heart's a beating pulp,
All mangled and misused,
Thoughts of her still make me gulp,
My emotions are all bruised.
I don't want to live,
And I don't want to die.
I got nothing left to give,
And what I feel is a lie.
Why can't life just deal me straight,
Why must I always pay,
These feelings are an awful weight,
And yet they always stay.
I take it all inside of me,
I'm about to explode,
Why can't anyone see,
I want my story told.
Now I live for my dreams,
'cause I know she's always there,
But when I come back it seems,
I can only feel despair.
Sometimes I want to feel the pain,
outside the way I feel inside,
Doing stupid things again,
Just to replace the ache inside.
I need her now, here in my arms,
to fill the empty place in me,
I ned to feel he sweet charms,
To stop the ache and be free.
I guess that's it,
There is no cure
I guess that's it,
I'm finished for sure.
I'm dead with a heartbeat,
trying not to breathe,
Every second i greet,
brings me closer to peace.
There's no point without her,
so why carry on,
But maybe one day, I'm not sure,
this distance will be gone.
Maybe she'll see me and then,
I'll have a reason to live,
So now I dream again,
Until I can no longer give.

By: Doug Morton
http://wordpoet.tripod.com




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Re: Rejected II (User Rating: 1 )
by Rose on Sunday, 6th October 2002 @ 11:53:42 AM AEST
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Im sorry this has hurt you so, the pains of love, can be a real torment. I can only wish you time to heal, for thats all it can be. Its what Im been going thru myself. Its pure H*ll, I know, like not being able to feel anything, like not being able to eat, sleep, or just all you think about is that one. It will amend, and from it, you will grow. tough experience, I hope you do learn from it, and from this pain, as it will become your healing. Your Heart will love again, and you will be ok. the pain will recede, the memories will be there, this is what will make you stronger in time. take care,
Amber Rose :)


Re: Rejected II (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 6th October 2002 @ 01:58:13 PM AEST
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You are DEFINATELY not alone in feeling this way :(
Hopefully it gets better. I'm not sure if it will, because I still feel like this.


Re: Rejected II (User Rating: 1 )
by Lia on Monday, 7th October 2002 @ 10:52:04 PM AEST
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I hope you can feel the hug I am sending out to you....Look around you Wordpoet, there is beauty but only a few feet away :) ...Doesn't make this ache you feel go away at all, but might help to mute it a little bit.


Re: Rejected II (User Rating: 1 )
by WordPoet on Tuesday, 8th October 2002 @ 06:12:57 AM AEST
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LOL.... When I read this I was sitting in my little office with four white walls and pin up notes and my boss sitting a few feet away. If he's beautiful I'll eat my hat. But I did get the hug, thanx.




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