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when I see AIDS patient
My eyes are hurting me
when I see them suffering
Is AIDS God's punishment for
the people who went against nature love?
God has created a man and a woman
and he said a man for a woman
God has shown us the beauty of love
and he has taught us the meaning of the love
He wants us to be faithful to our love
Today, the world turned in to dark
The value of the love has been lost
The value of the faith has been lost
This misuse of nature love
angrily spreading AIDS everywhere
Our innocent children are living
in the world of AIDS
Let us fight against this deadly virus AIDS
and save our children and our nation

Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka

Copyright ©2004 Ravi Sathasivam
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Protect our children from AIDS.....

Contributed by ravisada on Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 02:08:06 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

My heart is paining me
when I see AIDS patient
My eyes are hurting me
when I see them suffering
Is AIDS God's punishment for
the people who went against nature love?
God has created a man and a woman
and he said a man for a woman
God has shown us the beauty of love
and he has taught us the meaning of the love
He wants us to be faithful to our love
Today, the world turned in to dark
The value of the love has been lost
The value of the faith has been lost
This misuse of nature love
angrily spreading AIDS everywhere
Our innocent children are living
in the world of AIDS
Let us fight against this deadly virus AIDS
and save our children and our nation

Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka

Copyright ©2004 Ravi Sathasivam

Copyright © ravisada ... [ 2004-05-08 02:08:06]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Protect our children from AIDS..... (User Rating: 1 )
by reprobate on Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 07:44:17 AM AEST
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i agree that we need to save our children from this most horrendous of diseases. i think the sentiment here is noble but i don't think the causes expressed are viable. god may allow things to occur but not as a punishment, only as an extension of his promise for free will. the god i know, is one of love and kindness. just my opinion, though.
good piece.
thanks for sharing

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