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Your tears were bright
It hurts me to know
My friend was in a fight

That day your heart cried out
It called out for a friend
And I stepped forward to its call
To make the teardrops end

But now I've come to see
That they are here to stay
Yet my duty as a friend
The tears to wipe away

I just want you to know
Of my life you're a part
I do love you Carrie
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A Place in My Heart

Contributed by wachumiri on Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 04:52:51 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

In the moonlight
Your tears were bright
It hurts me to know
My friend was in a fight

That day your heart cried out
It called out for a friend
And I stepped forward to its call
To make the teardrops end

But now I've come to see
That they are here to stay
Yet my duty as a friend
The tears to wipe away

I just want you to know
Of my life you're a part
I do love you Carrie
You've a place in my heart

Copyright Â© wachumiri ... [ 2004-05-05 16:52:51]
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Re: A Place in My Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by eatfresh22 on Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 05:44:00 PM AEST
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Hmmm....David, you are such a good friend. Thanks for always being there for me. I'm so glad that I can count on you. Thanks for always listening. (Don't worry Andrew...I like you, and I'm glad you listen too). Thanks for your friendship. Thanks for just being.
~Love Carrie~

Oh ya, and thanks for your comedy!

Re: A Place in My Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 04:05:24 PM AEST
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a very nice, meaningful write.
so well done.
beautifully written.
Arden

Re: A Place in My Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 01:35:09 PM AEST
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Getting much better, Wachu.
You'll note that God looks out for us in every dark time. A friend's hug is His own way of hugging you.

Tears are all right, but let's keep fighting. We're Warriors of the Light. We don't give in.
Slàn
Andrew

Re: A Place in My Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 08:14:10 PM AEST
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Your poem is very good, I was compelled to read a poem of yours because of a comment of yours I saw in another writer's poem.

Re: A Place in My Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 02:26:11 AM AEST
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beautifully written, heartfelt and honest poem, hugs n' love nessa

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Re: A Place in My Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 08:37:28 PM AEST
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What a splendid friendship you share with my dear Carrie. Terriffic poem.

Lots of love and peace be with you,

Chelsea

Re: A Place in My Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by lexxie on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 06:45:36 PM AEST
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David,i can see that anyone whos friends with you are trully lucky,your poetry is like warter flowing watching it spill through the cracks beautiful

l3xxi3

Re: A Place in My Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by anitajames on Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 01:30:24 PM AEST
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Comforting and sweet. Nice job.

Ann

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