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Array ( [sid] => 46212 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => With these demons, I...Alone! [time] => 2004-05-04 20:42:35 [hometext] => I shouldn't be here, yet you can't............ [bodytext] => It's not that I don't care
It isn't that I'm not aware
It isn't an illness taking me
It's just a darkness that you can't see

I sit in this body without any sight
I'm not sure if it's wrong or whatever's right
I only know this hated feeling inside
I know it's ebb and flow, like some tormenting tide

I need for you to truly understand
I can't be caressed by your soothing hand
I really must have you know
I do care about you but you surely must go

I have to be here and you don't
I'm sure it won't last or I hope it won't
I despise this total horror inside
I just have to wait for the vile to subside

It's not an illness that's plaguing me
It's something inside that you shouldn't see
It's not something that I can share
It's only because of you that I even care [comments] => 6 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 61 [informant] => reprobate [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
With these demons, I...Alone!

Contributed by reprobate on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 08:42:35 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



It's not that I don't care
It isn't that I'm not aware
It isn't an illness taking me
It's just a darkness that you can't see

I sit in this body without any sight
I'm not sure if it's wrong or whatever's right
I only know this hated feeling inside
I know it's ebb and flow, like some tormenting tide

I need for you to truly understand
I can't be caressed by your soothing hand
I really must have you know
I do care about you but you surely must go

I have to be here and you don't
I'm sure it won't last or I hope it won't
I despise this total horror inside
I just have to wait for the vile to subside

It's not an illness that's plaguing me
It's something inside that you shouldn't see
It's not something that I can share
It's only because of you that I even care




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Re: With these demons, I...Alone! (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 08:50:25 PM AEST
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Sad but really deep!
good writing!
luv, huggs, faith, hope,
emy


Re: With these demons, I...Alone! (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 08:54:43 PM AEST
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Good poem.


Re: With these demons, I...Alone! (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 09:00:45 PM AEST
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Mike, you should care for you and for the children. I hope you do begin to care greatly and get it fixed. Kick it out, stomp on it, do whatever it takes, but be happy within yourself. It is possible, I know.

Rita


Re: With these demons, I...Alone! (User Rating: 1 )
by JennyFruFru on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 09:37:29 PM AEST
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its really creepy at first and then at the end its takes a very sadning twist... if thats even i word i dunno... but anyways... its a great write packed full of emotion...


Re: With these demons, I...Alone! (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 01:28:58 AM AEST
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I can understand what your going through theres always a darkenss in everyone .
great job on the poem.


Re: With these demons, I...Alone! (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 11th May 2009 @ 07:48:43 PM AEST
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I feel as though I can relate in some way...i guess i'm not the only one with a hidden monster.




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