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Array ( [sid] => 4602 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Daddy, Don't You Care? [time] => 2002-10-04 14:45:00 [hometext] => I don't what to say about it. So, just read it. [bodytext] => Suicide
Daddy
Don't cry
You don't really care
If I die
Or
If I live
I've always just been
Your punching bag
And so on.

Black eyes
At the age of three
Brocken bones
At four
You hurt me
Daddy
The abuse
I had to take
I didn't deserve it.

So
Drink another beer
By the end
I'll be dead
Don't mind the silence
Or the screams
Just keep on
Go on smoking
That cigarette
It's just
Your little boy
Is dead
Daddy
Don't you care?

Don't you feel
A thing
Remorse
For the bleeding
Nights of pain
And tears
You caused.

Aren't you sad
I'm gone
Like forever
Not just
Until tomorrow
Don't you see
You're punching bag
Is gone
Never to return
I took my life
Wouldn't give you
The pleasure
Of killing me. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 321 [topic] => 36 [informant] => ml02 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Daddy, Don't You Care?

Contributed by ml02 on Friday, 4th October 2002 @ 02:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Suicide
Daddy
Don't cry
You don't really care
If I die
Or
If I live
I've always just been
Your punching bag
And so on.

Black eyes
At the age of three
Brocken bones
At four
You hurt me
Daddy
The abuse
I had to take
I didn't deserve it.

So
Drink another beer
By the end
I'll be dead
Don't mind the silence
Or the screams
Just keep on
Go on smoking
That cigarette
It's just
Your little boy
Is dead
Daddy
Don't you care?

Don't you feel
A thing
Remorse
For the bleeding
Nights of pain
And tears
You caused.

Aren't you sad
I'm gone
Like forever
Not just
Until tomorrow
Don't you see
You're punching bag
Is gone
Never to return
I took my life
Wouldn't give you
The pleasure
Of killing me.

Copyright © ml02 ... [ 2002-10-04 14:45:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Daddy, Don't You Care? (User Rating: 1 )
by LJ on Friday, 4th October 2002 @ 04:10:17 PM AEST
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Wow! I don't know what to say. I'm sorry isn't enough.

Re: Daddy, Don't You Care? (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Saturday, 5th October 2002 @ 06:21:39 AM AEST
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Hi, MI02, this was written with so much emotion. I can feel the pain and torture endured by the child. Great write. Such a sad situation..
Jenni

Re: Daddy, Don't You Care? (User Rating: 1 )
by aubz_09 on Monday, 14th October 2002 @ 08:26:31 AM AEST
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You write so well. This poem almost made me cry, :(. I'm sorry

Re: Daddy, Don't You Care? (User Rating: 1 )
by Twinky on Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 04:02:32 AM AEST
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ohh my god this poem hit me hard.... i was never physically abused but i have been mentally and emotionally abused by my parents... this poem is really good and it has a lot of emotion in it..... it made me cry, but thats ok

Re: Daddy, Don't You Care? (User Rating: 1 )
by TiNyOnE on Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 12:19:08 PM AEST
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wow, this was really deep
i was never hit to the point of bruises and such.
but this was a good poem. it really made a good strong point.
keep up the good writing.

Re: Daddy, Don't You Care? (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 02:21:28 PM AEST
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Great poem. I can feel the pain and emotions there. It made me cry.
ShadowsCloud

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