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Array ( [sid] => 45710 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Rivalling the God [time] => 2004-05-01 09:19:22 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The Space is shrinking
The day of the end is firmly sidling up
We are heading for it so far
Time enters its last phase

Human wit can be a cure
Intelligence could help the miracle of life

We have coped with asteroids
We have coped with doom of the Sun
We have coped with all black holes
The biggest test expects us now
 
Can we rival the God himself?
We maintain today
There’re no other spaces
In the Existence
But all is not known yet…
There’s still a space
For research

Very efficient
Neural networks
Complicated
Calculations
Figures, numbers, variables…
A.E. was the first
A flock of minds after him
And we are here
In this ill-fated time
 
A clinical legacy from the past
It’s lying firmly in our hands
How can we dispose
Of this extensive knowledge?

We ply superb technology
Controlling almost all in space
Dreaming our million times clonned dreams
But we can’t abase time yet…
 
It’s possible
To get more time by a travel back
It’s possible
To wait for a new big-bang
It’s possible
To get more time by a return back
 
To abase laws of the Universe
To rape time-order-conservation theory
To use all power and potential
Of the “Second space� in our heads
To realize our ancient
And most bolding dream
And visit yesterday
To go away from today
To leave this hour, second, this time
To desolate this time-level, this divine crime
To turn time’s arrow back
To shift our entity

It’s possible…  
Out of space and time
Out of reality sentenced to death
Out of space and time
Out of this ominous nightmare
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Rivalling the God

Contributed by Falkenbach on Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 09:19:22 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



The Space is shrinking
The day of the end is firmly sidling up
We are heading for it so far
Time enters its last phase

Human wit can be a cure
Intelligence could help the miracle of life

We have coped with asteroids
We have coped with doom of the Sun
We have coped with all black holes
The biggest test expects us now
 
Can we rival the God himself?
We maintain today
There’re no other spaces
In the Existence
But all is not known yet…
There’s still a space
For research

Very efficient
Neural networks
Complicated
Calculations
Figures, numbers, variables…
A.E. was the first
A flock of minds after him
And we are here
In this ill-fated time
 
A clinical legacy from the past
It’s lying firmly in our hands
How can we dispose
Of this extensive knowledge?

We ply superb technology
Controlling almost all in space
Dreaming our million times clonned dreams
But we can’t abase time yet…
 
It’s possible
To get more time by a travel back
It’s possible
To wait for a new big-bang
It’s possible
To get more time by a return back
 
To abase laws of the Universe
To rape time-order-conservation theory
To use all power and potential
Of the “Second space� in our heads
To realize our ancient
And most bolding dream
And visit yesterday
To go away from today
To leave this hour, second, this time
To desolate this time-level, this divine crime
To turn time’s arrow back
To shift our entity

It’s possible…  
Out of space and time
Out of reality sentenced to death
Out of space and time
Out of this ominous nightmare




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Re: Rivalling the God (User Rating: 1 )
by reprobate on Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 02:27:52 AM AEST
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Einstein was far from the first but he was, without a doubt, the most well known.
good job.
thanks for sharing


Re: Rivalling the God (User Rating: 1 )
by Tinkkerbelle on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 08:26:06 PM AEST
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Highly sophisticated. Excellent job.




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