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Dreams
Contributed by
When_Doves_Cry
on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 02:38:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Meadows and fields
Filled wiht lush grass
Do you not feel all my dreams
That have passed?
Swirling water
Do you not sense
While rushing through the hills
My sorrowful presence?
Magical flowers
Dancing in the breeze
Why can't you please try
To set my mind at ease?
Majestic boulders
Glaring angrily down
Why is it you never plunge
To the hard, flat ground?
Ruthless cold wind
Please do not deem
My dreams are alive
Although they cannot be seen.
For my dreams follow me
Like an eagle does his prey
I will never be free from them
Trapped, night and day.
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Re: Dreams
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by blueheart on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 03:10:19 AM AEST
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| Dreamy and calm. A refreshing read. |
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Re: Dreams
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by Dawny on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 05:05:34 AM AEST
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This has great imagery, very expressive...Excellent
Love Dawny x |
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Re: Dreams
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by shelby on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 06:36:36 PM AEST
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lovely
Michelle |
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